[MUL] Mega Man 10 - "Fireball Strike (Strike Man Stage)" by WaluigiTime64

[Zeta]

Submission Information:
Series: Mega Man
Game: Mega Man 10
Console: Multiplatform
Title: Fireball Strike (Strike Man Stage)
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: WaluigiTime64

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[WaluigiTime64]

Friendly reminder that I use Finale NotePad and MuseScore.

[Onionleaf]

Sounds pretty good! Just a few little things that might(?) be useful:

• Don't forget to add a dynamic marking in the beginning.
• The first 6 measures seem to be missing the needed "drive". Perhaps including those softer 16ths notes in one hand would help?
• The LH notes after G step down in semitones, so the notes in m7 should be F naturals. Similar pattern in the LH m11-12 as well as m19-20, which you actually wrote correctly in m15-16, so you can just move/copy those two bars to fix that.
• I feel like I'm hearing a C note on the first beat of measure 17.
• m. 24, on the 3rd beat, it sounds like there should be a minor second chord there where the two melodies play together.
• Maybe have the funky beat in m. 41-43 be at a higher pitch to make it sound a bit more like the original?

That's about it from me. Great job so far!

[WaluigiTime64]

• Don't forget to add a dynamic marking in the beginning.

Wait... It was there in my unformatted file...

• The first 6 measures seem to be missing the needed "drive". Perhaps including those softer 16ths notes in one hand would help?

I had to alter it slightly, but it's there now. It's a bit loud though.

• The LH notes after G step down in semitones, so the notes in m7 should be F naturals.

I swear I'm hearing a solid E there.

Similar pattern in the LH m11-12 as well as m19-20, which you actually wrote correctly in m15-16, so you can just move/copy those two bars to fix that.

Dunno how I failed to recognise that. Whoops.

• I feel like I'm hearing a C note on the first beat of measure 17.

That's because there is one and I somehow missed it.

• m. 24, on the 3rd beat, it sounds like there should be a minor second chord there where the two melodies play together.

Correct, there is indeed a minor second, and I did recognise it while arranging. I decided against it because it clashes with the very next note.

• Maybe have the funky beat in m. 41-43 be at a higher pitch to make it sound a bit more like the original?

It sounded pretty bad when I tried that. I might just get someone to replace it with an actual beat.

SUB updated. All of that was definitely useful, thank you.

[WaluigiTime64]

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[Maelstrom]

I can find only one flaw: You've got a floating rest in the RH of m30. Place it as if there was no layer 2.

[WaluigiTime64]

Should be fixed now. Thanks.

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