[WiiU] Xenoblade Chronicles X - "PianoX1" by Zeila

Started by Zeta, January 18, 2017, 04:02:11 PM

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Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Xenoblade Chronicles X
Console: Wii U
Title: PianoX1
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Zeila

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MomoQca

OMG yes! This soundtrack is incredibly underrated. Actually, there is a severe lack of piano sheets on the site for both Xenoblade games. :(

Zeila

I'm glad you like it. I'm submitting at least one more after this
also bump

Maelstrom

Quote from: Zeila on February 15, 2017, 04:03:21 PMalso bump
Ask and you shall receive.
Maybe.
Feedback for the first half:
Ritenutos would be better than all the rit.+a tempo combos. Just abbreviate it Riten.
Some LH notes at the begining of a measure are held longer. Idk if you want to notate it, but it's there, like in m22/16.
m37 is bleh. If you're going to split it up, don't use tied notes or eights. It makes it really hard to follow that way. Also, there is no Bb in beat 3.25.

Overall, excellent arrangement.

Latios212

- m. 40 - perhaps put the G in the RH? For the continuity of voices.
- Maybe move the last C in m. 41 a bit to the right; right now it's almost directly under the Eb.
- There's another tempo fluctuation around m. 48 you could notate.

Very nice sheet you have here. However there are a bunch of notes I don't hear in the original.

- m. 50: I don't hear the D being re-struck on beat 3. More like held over.
- m. 52: The G on beat 2.
- m. 60: The C on beat 3.
- m. 66: The last D.

And the last measure should be 15ma, not 8va.

The original track is very nice, and your sheet is as well.
My arrangements and YouTube channel!

Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
who needs education when you can have WAIFUS!!!!!

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Zeila

Quote from: Maelstrom on February 18, 2017, 02:10:33 PMSome LH notes at the begining of a measure are held longer. Idk if you want to notate it, but it's there, like in m22/16.
It's like that in the other PianoX's too. I don't really know how to notate that so I just left it alone

Quote from: Maelstrom on February 18, 2017, 02:10:33 PMm37 is bleh. If you're going to split it up, don't use tied notes or eights. It makes it really hard to follow that way. Also, there is no Bb in beat 3.25.
I decided to forego splitting it up and wrote it like this instead:

If there's a better alternative then feel free to suggest it

Everything else was updated. Thanks for the feedback (and compliments) you guys!

Latios212

If you're going to write it like that (which is fine btw, the performer will probably take some of those notes with the LH anyway) you may as well combine m. 41 similarly. (I experimented with cross-staff but it seems a bit imposing and unnecessary.)
My arrangements and YouTube channel!

Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
who needs education when you can have WAIFUS!!!!!

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This submission has been accepted by Latios212.

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