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Author Topic: [GCN] Super Mario Sunshine - "F.L.U.D.D.'s User Instructions" (Replacement) by WiiMan96 & E. Gadd In  (Read 350 times)

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Series: Super Mario
Game: Super Mario Sunshine
Console: Nintendo GameCube
Title: F.L.U.D.D.'s User Instructions
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arrangers: WiiMan96 & E. Gadd Industries


Replacement Information:

Links to Existing Sheet: MUS | MIDI | PDF
Replacement Type: Challenge (new arranger)
« Last Edit: December 03, 2017, 12:09:49 AM by Sebastian »
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https://www.dropbox.com/s/mukdeo5yvzwfr6c/07.%20Meeting%20F.L.U.D.D.wav?dl=1
https://www.dropbox.com/s/3twdis6374magp3/08.%20Got%20F.L.U.D.D.wav?dl=1
https://www.dropbox.com/s/k4lebxiaxb61dpe/09.%20F.L.U.D.D.%27s%20User%20Instructions.wav?dl=1

Okie, @Olimar:

Next time submit something like this as a replacement. (Since I can't quote from archive)
I went ahead and deleted that one so this could be a replacement. The name of the sheet just needs to be renamed "F.L.U.D.D."
I also deleted it to add WiiMan (even if I could do it without deleting the sheet, it's just another reason I went ahead and did it)

Thanks for the feedback, and the files have been updated! (Idk how you heard those bass notes in m 4-7, 12-13 o_O)
« Last Edit: October 04, 2017, 12:17:17 AM by E. Gadd Industries »
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Looks better. I’ll have to check it more in-depth later, but right off the bat I can tell you that you’ll need to move your tempo marking for “got fludd!” As it’s colliding with the fermata. 
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Sorry for the slowness in submissions recently!

Sheet looks great.
Just two things:
All the notes look good except for this passage:


Just get these fixed and you're good. Also, center-align the second-page title. It's slightly off. You may want to center it in your template, as well.
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-The first two notes (the beeping) should be Bb's, not B's.
-The tremolos in the first couple measures should be half-step trills. It's supposed to be an anticipation of the coming scalular figure that is also planes half-steps. It's also vastly easier to play.
-I think the entire introduction would look better notated like this:
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Since it's cutscene music, let fermatas help you organize the ideas. The pauses between actions shouldn't be metered out.
-Measure 7 LH should have a C on beat three, not a D.
-The LH in measures 8-9 are the same rhythm used before and that come later, but you've notated it differently (with quarter notes rather than eighth notes). I would recommend using eighths.
-The notes that Seb. pointed out also need to be corrected.

Here is a completed file that I would highly recommend you use.
https://www.dropbox.com/s/mb8tllj176n85x4/07.-09.%20FLUDD12345.mus?dl=1

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The files have been updated. E. Gadd has given the Updaters permission to edit and accept his sheets in his absence.
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This submission has been accepted by Sebastian.

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot
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