[Wii] Super Paper Mario - "Overthere Stair" by Sebastian

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Submission Information:
Series: Super Mario
Game: Super Paper Mario
Console: Nintendo Wii
Title: Overthere Stair
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Sebastian

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[Sebastian]

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Discussed/reviewed extensively over Discord, and some changes and revisions have been made before it was posted here. It's looking good!

[Latios212]

Nice! Try as I might, I really can't find anything wrong here closely inspecting the notes and accidentals. But zooming out and looking at the larger picture I have a couple small things to point out:
- It'd be helpful to put a dynamic so the performer knows how much to dim. down to between m. 52-53.
- Also dynamics - it might be worth thinking about how m. 4 and 60 lead into measure 5, instead of just mp/ff to mf.
- Staff spacing on page 2 could be adjusted a bit - second and third systems could be separated a bit more, fourth system has a rather large space between staves while the last has a rather small space, etc.

[Sebastian]

- It'd be helpful to put a dynamic so the performer knows how much to dim. down to between m. 52-53.

Added.

- Also dynamics - it might be worth thinking about how m. 4 and 60 lead into measure 5, instead of just mp/ff to mf.

It goes back to mf between 60 and 5. I added a dynamic to show that.

- Staff spacing on page 2 could be adjusted a bit - second and third systems could be separated a bit more, fourth system has a rather large space between staves while the last has a rather small space, etc.

Adjusted.

Files updated.

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This submission has been accepted by Latios212.

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