[DELETED] [GCN] Pikmin 2 - "Frontier Cavern" by Olimar12345

Started by Zeta, April 08, 2018, 09:40:18 PM

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Zeta

Submission Information:

Series: Pikmin
Game: Pikmin 2
Console: Nintendo GameCube
Title: Frontier Cavern
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Olimar12345

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Olimar12345



(Technically that part that adds in for the working/treasure variations is also being randomly mixed up, but for the sake of the arrangement I standardized it)
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Olimar12345

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Sebastian

Notes look good. Nice arrangement. The only thing I really have for this one is that some of the rolls look like they're colliding with the notes. Most notably, M. 65 & 72 (and others like it).

According to this, they're technically not colliding
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But they look like it at 100%.
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I'll leave it up to you whether you would like to edit that or not.

I approve of this arrangement.



Olimar12345

Meh I'm not sure if that's is worth my time. Thanks for checking it!
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Latios212

If nowhere else, I do strongly recommend it in m. 33, 40, and 65-72. There's enough room in those measures to nudge everything to the right slightly, which I think would make it look much nicer. Similarly I know this sheet is super tight on space but if you could give the "Working" and "Treasure" variations just a tad more space above them, that would be great. You could free up some space for that by reducing the gap between LH/RH staves - it's unnecessarily wide for the first few variations.

But yeah, aside from that, looks terrific!
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Olimar12345

Eeeeeeeeh fine I'll look at it later and consider it.
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Zeta

This submission has been accepted by Latios212.

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