Submission Information:
Series: Mario Party
Game: Mario Party 4
Console: Nintendo GameCube
Title: Fortune's Turn
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: cacabish (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=6042)
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Yeah, your left hand is
never gonna get tired.
- If you don't want to beam across things like m1 RH, then you should split places like m2 beats 3-4. 1+2 8th notes instead of 3 together (or 2+1 like in m17). It just makes things more visually consistent.
- m2 beat 3 LH: Beam across this beat. I'd also consider using a staccato 8th note on beat 3.25 instead of 16th note + rest. It reduces clutter.
- Beat 4.5 of m13 and 15 doesn't really sound any longer to me than any of the other 8th notes, maybe put staccatos on them.
- I would move all the systems down just a bit since there's a bit more space on the bottom, and then move the composer/arranger info down so it's not vertically overlapping with the title.
- Tempo marking should be aligned with the left side of the time signature.
Quote from: Static on July 21, 2020, 12:30:12 PMIf you don't want to beam across things like m1 RH, then you should split places like m2 beats 3-4. 1+2 8th notes instead of 3 together (or 2+1 like in m17). It just makes things more visually consistent.
I'm not sure if this also applies to measures m.13 and m.15 at beat 3.5 (with the three eighth notes). I don't think so, but I could be wrong.
Aside from that issue, I've implemented all of Static's suggestions and updated the files accordingly.
Quote from: cacabish on July 21, 2020, 01:39:45 PMI'm not sure if this also applies to measures m.13 and m.15 at beat 3.5 (with the three eighth notes). I don't think so, but I could be wrong.
Yeah, it does. Other than that, everything else looks great.
Also to beats 1.5-2 in m. 14/16 LH :)
Alright, methinks I got them all. The files have been updated according to your guys' suggestions.
Let me know if there's anything else!
looks gooood
One last thing, Hudson Soft should be listed in the copyright info with Nintendo since they developed the game.
Quote from: Static on July 23, 2020, 01:31:06 PMOne last thing, Hudson Soft should be listed in the copyright info with Nintendo since they developed the game.
Good catch! I had forgotten about that. :P
It should be fixed now -- I've added them to the footer text and the score metadata and updated the submission files.
Looks great
This submission has been accepted by Static (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=4960).
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