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Author Topic: [GCN] Mario Party 4 - "Fortune's Turn" by cacabish  (Read 372 times)

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[GCN] Mario Party 4 - "Fortune's Turn" by cacabish
« on: July 15, 2020, 09:45:17 PM »

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Series: Mario Party
Game: Mario Party 4
Console: Nintendo GameCube
Title: Fortune's Turn
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: cacabish
« Last Edit: July 23, 2020, 11:19:46 PM by cacabish »
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Re: [GCN] Mario Party 4 - "Fortune's Turn" by cacabish
« Reply #1 on: July 15, 2020, 09:46:12 PM »

Yeah, your left hand is never gonna get tired.
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Re: [GCN] Mario Party 4 - "Fortune's Turn" by cacabish
« Reply #2 on: July 21, 2020, 08:30:12 PM »

  • If you don't want to beam across things like m1 RH, then you should split places like m2 beats 3-4. 1+2 8th notes instead of 3 together (or 2+1 like in m17). It just makes things more visually consistent.
  • m2 beat 3 LH: Beam across this beat. I'd also consider using a staccato 8th note on beat 3.25 instead of 16th note + rest. It reduces clutter.
  • Beat 4.5 of m13 and 15 doesn't really sound any longer to me than any of the other 8th notes, maybe put staccatos on them.
  • I would move all the systems down just a bit since there's a bit more space on the bottom, and then move the composer/arranger info down so it's not vertically overlapping with the title.
  • Tempo marking should be aligned with the left side of the time signature.
« Last Edit: July 21, 2020, 08:33:43 PM by Static »
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Re: [GCN] Mario Party 4 - "Fortune's Turn" by cacabish
« Reply #3 on: July 21, 2020, 09:39:45 PM »

If you don't want to beam across things like m1 RH, then you should split places like m2 beats 3-4. 1+2 8th notes instead of 3 together (or 2+1 like in m17). It just makes things more visually consistent.
I'm not sure if this also applies to measures m.13 and m.15 at beat 3.5 (with the three eighth notes). I don't think so, but I could be wrong.

Aside from that issue, I've implemented all of Static's suggestions and updated the files accordingly.
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Re: [GCN] Mario Party 4 - "Fortune's Turn" by cacabish
« Reply #4 on: July 21, 2020, 10:05:37 PM »

I'm not sure if this also applies to measures m.13 and m.15 at beat 3.5 (with the three eighth notes). I don't think so, but I could be wrong.
Yeah, it does. Other than that, everything else looks great.

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Re: [GCN] Mario Party 4 - "Fortune's Turn" by cacabish
« Reply #5 on: July 22, 2020, 12:11:56 AM »

Also to beats 1.5-2 in m. 14/16 LH :)
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Re: [GCN] Mario Party 4 - "Fortune's Turn" by cacabish
« Reply #6 on: July 22, 2020, 01:12:27 AM »

Alright, methinks I got them all. The files have been updated according to your guys' suggestions.
Let me know if there's anything else!
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Re: [GCN] Mario Party 4 - "Fortune's Turn" by cacabish
« Reply #7 on: July 22, 2020, 05:15:41 PM »

looks gooood
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Re: [GCN] Mario Party 4 - "Fortune's Turn" by cacabish
« Reply #8 on: July 23, 2020, 09:31:06 PM »

One last thing, Hudson Soft should be listed in the copyright info with Nintendo since they developed the game.

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Re: [GCN] Mario Party 4 - "Fortune's Turn" by cacabish
« Reply #9 on: July 23, 2020, 11:23:35 PM »

One last thing, Hudson Soft should be listed in the copyright info with Nintendo since they developed the game.
Good catch! I had forgotten about that. :P

It should be fixed now -- I've added them to the footer text and the score metadata and updated the submission files.
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Re: [GCN] Mario Party 4 - "Fortune's Turn" by cacabish
« Reply #10 on: July 24, 2020, 03:57:32 AM »

Looks great

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Re: [GCN] Mario Party 4 - "Fortune's Turn" by cacabish
« Reply #11 on: July 24, 2020, 03:57:38 AM »

This submission has been accepted by Static.

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