Quote from: TheZeldaPianist275 on September 06, 2013, 06:08:40 PMAlso, it's "Ghirahim", not "Girahim". You should also probably keep the game name on one line.
But other than that, I like it. Good job
Yeah, my bad, I really thought it was Girahim...
Thanks for warning me!
Quote from: Ganondorf on September 06, 2013, 05:58:48 PMYeah, I checked it out. I think it's really fantastic! Would definitely love to play it!
I do think there could be improvements for sure though. I'm going to put aside the last page though (because I really am an over-stickler over rests and making notes as compressed as they can [i.e.: making the separated eighths on the last page into quarter rests and changing other rests into half rests with an eighth rest before them, etc.] and I can edit those parts for myself if I really want to).
(A few hours later.)
I was going to say I have feedback regarding the difference in volume between the bass and treble clef, but I've since re-listened to the song and it sounds actually tons more accurate and generally right than I thought. You did a fantastic job!! I can't help but wait to try playing!
I know what you're saying, I prefer that way too, but since it's a 6/8, sometimes using two 8th rests is more correct than one quarter rest in some parts... In the last page (I think you're talking measure 47), I cant compress the 16th rest because its a tuplet rest, its really needed there...
Later, tell me if it's comfortable for you to play
EDIT: Fixed some stuff:
-corrected Ghirahim's name in the sheet
-put the game name in one line
-hide some rests
-fixed some layering problems
-added 2 notes to the 1st chord in measure 48.
