[NDS] Pokémon Black Version & Pokémon White Version - "Juniper Pokémon Lab" by amc

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Submission Information:
Series: Pokémon
Game: Pokémon Black Version & Pokémon White Version
Console: Nintendo DS
Title: Juniper Pokémon Lab
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: amc

[amc]

[goldenscruff]

I was worried I had sniped your submission for a second...

[amc]

Lol I was worried too, it's all good

[Whoppybones]

m2 LH - I hear b3/4 as a B back down to a D#
m9-10 LH - I think the A# is on b1/3, not 2/4

I also think the MIDI would sound better without the invisible pedal markings that you have throughout the sheet. I don't think the notes are held long enough to really make that worth it.

I like the piece though!

[amc]

Updated.

[goldenscruff]

I can hear a kick b4 of m19. Maybe you could add a F# a fitfh below the C# in the LH 

m14 This measure currently feels too open unless you hold the pedal from the previous bar.
I'm not entirely sure but I think I hear an An Dn En in the bass b1, which sounds a bit too crunchy.
Changing the bass to AnDn b1 makes it feel fuller like the original.

m16 I'm hearing the bass as BnEn. The bass rehits on b4 as well, not b3.

m13-16 I think you can add the full strings line to the RH. (An      |F#  An  |Bn      |G#  Bn  |A#)

m28 I'm not hearing a Bn A# crunch, I'm pretty sure the LH has an A# instead.
m28 I'm hearing the approach as from A# to C#: This is how I would write it.

 
m32 I think the missing crunch here is a Gn in the LH