[3DS] Rune Factory 4 - "Wind Dragon's Tears" by Static39

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Submission Information:
Series: Harvest Moon/Story of Seasons
Game: Rune Factory 4
Console: Nintendo 3DS
Title: Wind Dragon's Tears
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Static39

[Static39]

[goldenscruff]

m18 The RH should have an An b1.5 where at the same pitch at the bottom of the chord.
m21 I hear An b2.5 LH
m35 I hear the RH as Dmin, a Bbmaj7 chord
m40 I hear b3 RH as AD
m43 I think the rit. should go on b2.

[Static39]

m18 The RH should have an An b1.5 where at the same pitch at the bottom of the chord.

Updated

m21 I hear An b2.5 LH

Updated

m35 I hear the RH as Dmin, a Bbmaj7 chord

Updated

m40 I hear b3 RH as AD

I'm not entirely sure what you're referring to here, but I hear it as written.
There is an A struck by the LH on b3 underneath the RH D so perhaps that's what you're hearing?

m43 I think the rit. should go on b2.

Agreed, updated accordingly.


Thanks for taking the time to review!

[goldenscruff]

m40 I hear b3 RH as AD

I'm not entirely sure what you're referring to here, but I hear it as written. There is an A struck by the LH on b3 underneath the RH D so perhaps that's what you're hearing?

Whoops wrong measure m39 b3.

m35 I meant the right hand as FAD, no Bb in the RH, that's just from the LH.

[Static39]

Whoops wrong measure m39 b3.

Oops yeah this is supposed to be AD, Updated.

m35 I meant the right hand as FAD, no Bb in the RH, that's just from the LH.

I knew something sounded off about this chord but I forgot about the Bb in the LH. Updated.

[Latios212]

Great work! About notes: I don't think I hear the C in m. 17 beat 3. Actually, I think the preceding and following chords might be just open sixths as well?

Aside from that, a few visual things:
- When having a roll marking on beat 1 that's right up against the barline, using the Measure Tool to add something like 0.05" to the measure helps the spacing work a bit better
- The 1. and 2. over the endings should be aligned over beat 1 (a bit far to the right in 23/25 and left in 42/43 right now)
- I think the D.C. is supposed to go over the staff (and the ending bracket here I suppose). The staves on the second page could use more space between them anyway.

[Static39]

I don't think I hear the C in m. 17 beat 3. Actually, I think the preceding and following chords might be just open sixths as well?

I actually had these as open sixths initially but second guessed myself later. Giving it another listen it definitely sounds more like just sixths to me.
Updated

- When having a roll marking on beat 1 that's right up against the barline, using the Measure Tool to add something like 0.05" to the measure helps the spacing work a bit better

Updated

- The 1. and 2. over the endings should be aligned over beat 1 (a bit far to the right in 23/25 and left in 42/43 right now)

I think these must have gotten misaligned when I was messing with the repeats.
Updated

- I think the D.C. is supposed to go over the staff (and the ending bracket here I suppose).

I was using Elaine Gould's music notation guide as a reference here for placing it underneath the bottom staff in braced parts. Taking a look at existing sheets on-site I can see it's most commonly placed above the top staff so for visual consistency I think putting it on top makes sense.
Updated


Thanks for looking over it!

[Latios212]

You're welcome! All the changes look good to me, approved