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Author Topic: [GBA] Pokémon Ruby Version & Pokémon Sapphire Version - "Cycling (Duet)" by amc  (Read 90 times)

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Submission Information:

Series: Pokémon
Game: Pokémon Ruby Version & Pokémon Sapphire Version
Console: Game Boy Advance
Title: Cycling
Instrumentation Piano Duet
Arranger: amc
« Last Edit: July 12, 2019, 04:56:57 PM by amc »
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You can edit the files instead of deleting it, you know.

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No problem, nothing was hurt.

It can just get confusing if there's feedback on the thread that's lost when the submission is deleted.

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This looks pretty solid! At a quick glance I'd suggest adding more dynamics and articulation. The phrase markings are great but some staccatos for example would be helpful to differentiate how some different parts are played, and there's definitely quite a bit of dynamic variation that I think the original desires.

Let me know if you want any specific suggestions!
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Hi, I've edited the sheets
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