[MUL] Night in the Woods - "Shapes" by BrainyLucario

Started by Zeta, May 07, 2020, 12:47:05 AM

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Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Night in the Woods
Console: Multiplatform
Title: Shapes
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: BrainyLucario

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BrainyLucario


This one felt really easy to do, minus two sections that i"m really unsure of. The one of which is the final measure
When given the choice between adulting and music, choose music every time.

Bespinben

#2
M. 1-8, m. 16-23 — Find a way to make this more playable. If you prioritize the ostinato, you may need to transpose the sustained notes; if you prioritize the original pitches, you may need to include rests in the ostinato to be able to play the sustained notes.

M. 11-12, 15, 26-27, 30 — Re-transcribe the melody here.

M. 9, 11, 13, 15, 24, 26, 28, 30 — Rhythm notation correction: Half notes, dotted half notes, and whole notes are allowed to cross the middle of the bar. You don't need to show beat 3 in these instances (see "Two-Level Rhythmic Parsing Rule").

Page layout — Try to avoid partially filled additional pages where possible. You could fit this onto 1 page easily.
Quote from: Nebbles on July 04, 2015, 12:05:12 PM
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BrainyLucario

#3
Gotcha, the page thing is a bit beyond me considering I have finale notepad 2012.

And I plan on prioritizing the ostinato, though the was of transposing might be a bit tricky for me to figure out, I'll see what I can work out.
When given the choice between adulting and music, choose music every time.

BrainyLucario

Fixed the melody and notation errors. I cant fix the page length one and need to transpose still. I might need to ask for help on that since ive never done that before
When given the choice between adulting and music, choose music every time.

BrainyLucario

Ok i think I transposed it like I intended to. it should be playable now.
When given the choice between adulting and music, choose music every time.

Bespinben

#6
M.16 and m.23 are still transcribed incorrectly. You'll also want to fix the bass in m. 13.

Some new things:
The bass in m.1-2, 5-6, 16-17, & 20-21 is actually a C natural, and there is an E for the middle voice in m.1-2 & m.15-16.
The ostinato is actually not straight quarters. Should look like this:
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Quote from: Nebbles on July 04, 2015, 12:05:12 PM
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BrainyLucario

Measure 16 and 23?  Umm I'm going to assume you mean 15 and 30 since I forgot to change them.

But otherwise i think I got it this time. The other changes have been added
When given the choice between adulting and music, choose music every time.

Bespinben

Oops -- yes, m.15 & 30 is what I meant, good catch. I've updated the files to have a 1-page layout, and also added a repeat marker to the end of the loop.

Nice job~

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Quote from: Nebbles on July 04, 2015, 12:05:12 PM
Someone beat Bespinben to making PMD music?! GASP!

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Latios212

Sweet, great work guys! This looks fantastic!

Just one tiny little thing - LH of m. 26 re-strikes the E on beat 4. (I hate it when pieces almost repeat perfectly lol) We'll get that edited in for ya.
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