[PC] The Legend of Heroes: Trails in the Sky - "Silver Will" by Maelstrom

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Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: The Legend of Heroes: Trails in the Sky
Console: PC
Title: Silver Will
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Maelstrom

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[Maelstrom]

Intro left out for obvious reasons

[Static]

Nice to see a Legend of Heroes sheet! Also this reminds me I still have to finish Sophisticated Fight

• I would include the intro, even if it's just octave C#s in the bass. It's still part of the track.
• m9 RH beat 2: The G#s should be G naturals.
• m18 RH beat 3-4: The C naturals should be B#s and the Ebs should be D#s (G#7b9 chord).
• m19-25 RH: The lower harmony sounds like it should be a 6th below the melody, not a 3rd.
• m34 LH sounds a bit more complex than you've written it. If you intentionally simplified it there, that's fine, but I wanted to point it out anyway.

Cool sheet.

[Maelstrom]

yes finish sophisticated fight already

m34 LH sounds a bit more complex than you've written it. If you intentionally simplified it there, that's fine, but I wanted to point it out anyway.

please don't give measure numbers after you add measures
yeah it was simplified to be more pianistic and playable.
While I was at it, I simplified the LH 16th runs to make the song more consistently playable.
Now there's never more than one 16th note in a row outside a few places in the melody where it's easy to reach without any crossing over.

I took the liberty of making the intro fermatas instead of two measures because that seems more in like with how someone would play it and not because 2 measures completely ruined my measure spacing

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[Static]

yes finish sophisticated fight alreadyplease don't give measure numbers after you add measures

Oh yeah, I'll keep that in mind in the future.

I took the liberty of making the intro fermatas instead of two measures because that seems more in like with how someone would play it and not because 2 measures completely ruined my measure spacing

Fair enough lol

Looks nice.

[Latios212]

Awesome! Just a few tiny things.

- m. 20 - make the first note an eighth + rest like m. 12. Also I'm hearing a C# instead of B under the G# in the second dyad
- Last bass notes of m. 34/42 and 36/44 should be lower (E# and C# respectively)
- Would be nice to move the 2,4. ending numbers left a bit.

[Maelstrom]

updated

[Libera]

Just popping in to say that I don't see why there are 3rd and 4th time repeats in the last section here.  It makes it look like that section plays four times whereas it doesn't in the original, it just goes straight back to bar 2 after bar 52 the first time.  Maybe there's something I'm missing but it doesn't make sense to me.

[Maelstrom]

It's because of the D.S.
It causes everything to be played a second time, and I made those changes so they're reflected in Finale's playback.

[Latios212]

Right, but as Libera said it looks misleading from the performer's standpoint. You can edit the displayed text to be different than the ending numbers used for playback.

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edit: I got it, accepting

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