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Re: Radiak488417's Replacements
« Reply #30 on: August 22, 2020, 08:39:41 PM »

- m1 beat 1 LH should be beamed together like in the RH.
- This is kinda nitpicky, but there were a few other developers that also worked on this game: Sora, Ltd. and Game Arts (I think there might be a few more but these are the big ones).
Done, not sure if the developers need to be in a certain order (pretty much every Brawl sheet seems to do it differently)

- A D.S. might be better than a simple repeat due to the length of the sheet, up to you though.
 Measure 2 actually sounds like it should be 7/8 instead of 4/4... Maybe I'm crazy though
I agree about the D.S., and no you're not crazy I hear the 7/8 bar. Both of these edits would require me to re-import the sheet though, which would mess up all the articulations and beaming again. If you could do these I'd appreciate it.
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Re: Radiak488417's Replacements
« Reply #31 on: August 22, 2020, 08:57:16 PM »

Actually, I just noticed that the downward slide dips below the note on beat 4 and comes back up, so if you want to keep the upward grace note, that works too. What's your preference?

I think the upward one works fine, so let's just go with that.
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Re: Radiak488417's Replacements
« Reply #32 on: August 22, 2020, 09:30:06 PM »

Done, not sure if the developers need to be in a certain order (pretty much every Brawl sheet seems to do it differently)
I agree about the D.S., and no you're not crazy I hear the 7/8 bar. Both of these edits would require me to re-import the sheet though, which would mess up all the articulations and beaming again. If you could do these I'd appreciate it.
- Developer/publisher order doesn't matter really.
- Both of those have been added to the file. I also added a courtesy natural to the A in m2 so the reader doesn't confuse it with the Ab in the LH.
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Re: Radiak488417's Replacements
« Reply #33 on: August 23, 2020, 01:15:22 AM »

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Re: Radiak488417's Replacements
« Reply #34 on: December 10, 2020, 02:22:05 AM »

Bumper Crop Bump
m37 RH - top note on b2 is a Eb, not a D.
LH m18 b4.5 - I hear a Eb here.
LH m19 b4.5 - I hear a F here
LH m34 b3-3.5 I hear Abs here.
Hide the 8vb?
Raise the rests in m26/30 and maybe even slightly higher in m31
I have a ventedda against beaming 8th notes in sets of 3 because it looks like triplets but there's no actual triplets in the song so you can ignore that if you want.

Otherwise pretty great.

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Re: Radiak488417's Replacements
« Reply #35 on: December 11, 2020, 07:36:51 AM »

m37 RH - top note on b2 is a Eb, not a D.
LH m18 b4.5 - I hear a Eb here.
LH m19 b4.5 - I hear a F here.
Got all these, thanks.

LH m34 b3-3.5 I hear Abs here.
I don't hear these, just hearing Fs.

Hide the 8vb?
Can't hide anything with notepad, so I'll need someone else to do that for me (as well as fixing the spacing and the pickup measure).

Hadn't looked at this one in a while, and I'm a bit unsure about the articulations on some of the notes. I'd appreciate some feedback on that if anyone's willing.
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Re: Radiak488417's Replacements
« Reply #36 on: December 13, 2020, 12:37:56 AM »

Bumper Crop Bump

Grabbing the formatting as well as hiding the 8vb. Other miscellaneous stuff like the pickup measure, typo in game title, etc. as well.

Remaining comments:
- m. 4/12 LH beat 3.5 should be G instead of Eb
- m. 22 LH last note should be F instead of Bb
- Last RH note of m. 31 should be Gb

LH m34 b3-3.5 I hear Abs here.
I don't hear these, just hearing Fs.
(Note: since I changed the first measure into a pickup measure this is m. 33 now) Yeah, I think F's. It's consistent with the rest of the bass in this section that way too.

Made all of the above changes and approved! Lemme know if anything looks incorrect. Back to you, Mael, for final review on this one :D
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Re: Radiak488417's Replacements
« Reply #37 on: December 13, 2020, 10:22:37 PM »

-m35 - I hear the C+Eb below the b3.5 Bb in m35, just like b1 and b2.5.
-m29 - I can't seem to hear that grace note at all
I'll defer to latios' and your ears for m34.

Your articulations are fine for the most part. Some suggestions:
m2/4/6 and similar - make b3 a staccato. It feels disconnected from the next phrase enough for it.
No need for a staccato on b4.5 of m17
I'd recommend staccatos for b2/2.5 of m22 LH., but not for b4/4.5
No need for a staccato on b4.5 of m28/30

The rest look fine.

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Re: Radiak488417's Replacements
« Reply #38 on: December 14, 2020, 01:16:08 AM »

-m35 - I hear the C+Eb below the b3.5 Bb in m35, just like b1 and b2.5.
I actually noticed that earlier today and had added it already.

-m29 - I can't seem to hear that grace note at all
That was to approximate the pitch bend in the original, I could take it out if you think it's not appropriate.

Got everything else, thanks.
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Re: Radiak488417's Replacements
« Reply #39 on: December 14, 2020, 09:03:20 PM »

Upon closer inspection, I think it's fine.

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edit: And with that, all your sheets have been accepted! I'll archive this thread, as we're done here.
« Last Edit: December 14, 2020, 09:05:19 PM by Maelstrom »
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