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Re: Zeila's Replacements
« Reply #45 on: February 18, 2021, 03:19:09 AM »

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This looks very nice, just a couple of minor comments:
- Top RH notes in m., 8 was missing a tie
- Ties in m. 25 could use a bit of adjusting to avoid overlap
- Ab in m. 40 should be G# (E chord)
- D.S. is a bit high and the segno is a bit left

Got this as well as the articulation reset, and accepting :)
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Re: Zeila's Replacements
« Reply #46 on: February 24, 2021, 04:03:51 AM »

Fountain of Dreams
  • Not sure if this is just because I'm using Finale 2014, but some of the slurs on page 2 look a bit too rounded if that makes sense. They should be more flat to line up better with the contour of the notes. If it looks normal to you then leave it as is.
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  • m18-19 RH I think would be better without the roll markings. The way the orchestra plays it in the original sounds just like staccato notes to me than deliberately out of sync, even if there is kind of a delay. Up to you though.
  • m28-31, 36-38 LH: You can include all the offbeat chords and bass notes if you want, it's not too hard to play.
  • m46 beats 3-4: This is the bVI of Eb Major (aka Cb Major chord), so the notes should be Cb, Eb, Gb (and the C# should be Db).

Really nice work, this is a very tough sheet to condense into a piano version.

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Re: Zeila's Replacements
« Reply #47 on: February 25, 2021, 09:26:38 PM »

Fountain of Dreams has been edited with the 1st and 4th points above (leaving m18-19, 28-31, and 36-38 as-is), and I'll now accept

That's it for your sheets, so I'll go ahead and archive this thread
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