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[Bloop]

For The Moon, I meant leaving in the 8th=8th at m6 regardless of if you deleted the tempo mark or not, but otherwise it looks good!
And UFO Ending looks good now too!

[Latios212]

The Moon

Looking good! The rhythm grouping in the intro is... a bit odd, most notably m. 4-5 being different than m. 2-3 even though the left hand is playing the same rhythm. That said, I don't really have any bright ideas and I think this works alright.

- You can flatten the slur a bit in m. 1, it arcs really high. The 8va can be lowered accordingly after that. Same for the last couple measures.
- m. 22-23 need to be respaced (just click on them)
- Space out your systems on page 2 a bit more to better fill up the white space near the bottom.
- Staccato on beat 1 LH of the last measure?

[NineLives]

I believe I got it. Does it look better or do I still need to adjust a couple things?

[Latios212]

All's good, just not sure if you meant to miss this last one:

- Staccato on beat 1 LH of the last measure?

[NineLives]

Ah. I mixed the last and second to last measures up. Should be good now!

[Latios212]

Cool, I'll accept!

[Libera]

Hi NineLives.  Since your first two submissions were substantial enough on their own, and your third extra sheet wasn't drastically simpler, we thought it would be fairest to stick with the first two for this project.  I'll be closing this topic now.