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Author Topic: [SNES] Kirby's Dream Course - "The First Hole" by LeviR.star  (Read 949 times)

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[SNES] Kirby's Dream Course - "The First Hole" by LeviR.star
« on: April 30, 2022, 11:33:33 PM »

Submission Information:

Series: Kirby
Game: Kirby's Dream Course
Console: Super Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: The First Hole
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: LeviR.star

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Re: [SNES] Kirby's Dream Course - "The First Hole" by LeviR.star
« Reply #1 on: April 30, 2022, 11:34:18 PM »




This is a re-write of an old sheet of mine, and I felt it deserved special treatment.
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Re: [SNES] Kirby's Dream Course - "The First Hole" by LeviR.star
« Reply #2 on: May 03, 2022, 01:57:46 AM »

  • m4/8 LH have an additional G on beat 4.5, on the first line of the staff.
  • m20 LH beat 4: Should be Db instead of C# (G7#5b5) - just look at how the voices resolve back to C
  • m28 RH: Last note should be E# instead of Fn (goes chromatically up to F#)
  • m29 RH has 3 voices throughout, and some of the notes are different than what you have:

Nice sheet

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Re: [SNES] Kirby's Dream Course - "The First Hole" by LeviR.star
« Reply #3 on: May 15, 2022, 11:13:45 PM »

  • m4/8 LH have an additional G on beat 4.5, on the first line of the staff.
  • m20 LH beat 4: Should be Db instead of C# (G7#5b5) - just look at how the voices resolve back to C
  • m28 RH: Last note should be E# instead of Fn (goes chromatically up to F#)
  • m29 RH has 3 voices throughout, and some of the notes are different than what you have:

Nice sheet

Thanks for checking all of this, these are things I should have revised from the original draft before submitting. New files are up.
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Re: [SNES] Kirby's Dream Course - "The First Hole" by LeviR.star
« Reply #4 on: May 15, 2022, 11:17:08 PM »

Nice, I approve

btw you don't need the courtesy F# in m29 anymore

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Re: [SNES] Kirby's Dream Course - "The First Hole" by LeviR.star
« Reply #5 on: May 16, 2022, 12:01:13 AM »

btw you don't need the courtesy F# in m29 anymore

Oop, my bad. Fixed now.
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Re: [SNES] Kirby's Dream Course - "The First Hole" by LeviR.star
« Reply #6 on: May 16, 2022, 06:41:41 AM »

Very glad to see more Dream Course representation!

-In m12, the offbeat chords/bass on beat 3 sound like they're held a little longer than the other notes, you could add some tenutos or staccato-tenutos there if you wanted
-It's really faint, but there are some more notes in m21 RH on beat 4:

-m29 RH: I actually don't hear the A's on beat 3, it sounds like these chords have D's in them instead
-m29 LH: the 16th pairs on beats 2 and 3 sound like they should be down an octave
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Re: [SNES] Kirby's Dream Course - "The First Hole" by LeviR.star
« Reply #7 on: May 16, 2022, 09:48:59 PM »

-m29 RH: I actually don't hear the A's on beat 3, it sounds like these chords have D's in them instead
Double checked the channels, that sounds right to me. C-D-F#

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Re: [SNES] Kirby's Dream Course - "The First Hole" by LeviR.star
« Reply #8 on: May 17, 2022, 03:33:16 AM »

-Very glad to see more Dream Course representation!
-In m12, the offbeat chords/bass on beat 3 sound like they're held a little longer than the other notes, you could add some tenutos or staccato-tenutos there if you wanted
-It's really faint, but there are some more notes in m21 RH on beat 4:

-m29 RH: I actually don't hear the A's on beat 3, it sounds like these chords have D's in them instead
-m29 LH: the 16th pairs on beats 2 and 3 sound like they should be down an octave

- you gonna help me get Iceberg Ocean on the site, or what? ;)
- I'd rather leave them the way they are, as they're about the same length as other instances of that pattern
- so there are! I'll mark them with tiny notes, to leave playing them up to the performer. It'll sure be a quick leap up to the high G-sharp
- I should've checked those chords myself before blindly changing them. Thanks!
- those might've been left like that from when I was first trying to make playability accommodations. Fixed

New files are up. Thanks, Radiak and Static!
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Re: [SNES] Kirby's Dream Course - "The First Hole" by LeviR.star
« Reply #9 on: June 02, 2022, 02:01:10 AM »

Looking swell! I've played this game a little bit and remember this fun piece :)

The only correction to point out is that m. 12/21 beat 2.25 is a low G instead of C. Other than that, the D.S. is high but everything else is good!
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Re: [SNES] Kirby's Dream Course - "The First Hole" by LeviR.star
« Reply #10 on: June 08, 2022, 08:22:56 PM »

- Looking swell! I've played this game a little bit and remember this fun piece :)
- The only correction to point out is that m. 12/21 beat 2.25 is a low G instead of C.
- Other than that, the D.S. is high but everything else is good!

- I couldn't get into the golf mechanic way back when, but I think it'll soon be time to give this game another chance
- Ah, so it is. Thank you for catching that
- moved the D.S. down a smidge

Files are updated.
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Re: [SNES] Kirby's Dream Course - "The First Hole" by LeviR.star
« Reply #11 on: June 08, 2022, 10:38:15 PM »

Neato, looks good!
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Re: [SNES] Kirby's Dream Course - "The First Hole" by LeviR.star
« Reply #12 on: June 08, 2022, 10:38:20 PM »

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