Solid rewrite! Not too much to comment on just a few note clarifications
Hey, thanks for checking this sheet, Kricketune! Much appreciated.
-m1-3 So far as I can tell for each measure the LH repeats that same beat 1 and 2 phrase on beats 3 and 4.
- Generally I think the way the LH was arranged works well and makes sense. However I think for m6+m8 beat 3.0 will sound a bit more like the original as a Bb instead of An.
-Similarly m13,15,17,19 LH beat 2.0 I think would be better as an En like the original. Basically the rhythm should have same notes as m37 and m39.
-m17 RH beat 2.0 this is a G
-Maybe you could put a tenuto on m44 RH beat 4.5? To reflect it is originally held out into m45 beat 1 but it's such a small tie-over it might not be worth bothering.
- It sounds like between m21-27 LH there's some mixing of parts between the bassline and the harmony channel (idk what else to call the non-melody non-bassline channel lol). Just wanted to check if that was intentional as opposed to just doing the bassline's notes.
- I know this, but I wanted to take the opportunity to account for all the textures, specifically the whole notes in the triangle. The second pulse is a bit quieter on beats 3 and 4 so I thought it would be fine to sustain on them in the left hand
- that sounds like a good idea. I'll also change the C's right after them into D's, it makes more sense IMO
- alright yup, got that. I think those are leftovers from when I was still experimenting with LH patterns
- ah yes, and same with m. 13. That's what I get for copying and pasting the melody from my old arrangement
- yeah I'm not sure it's worth it, maybe if there were more tenutos scattered throughout the score, but in this case I'm opposed. Thanks for the suggestion though
It sounds like between m21-27 LH there's some mixing of parts between the bassline and the harmony channel (idk what else to call the non-melody non-bassline channel lol). Just wanted to check if that was intentional as opposed to just doing the bassline's notes.
Yes, that was intentional. The bass line and countermelody don't exactly mix well so I thought it'd be better to write them as one, instead of putting the countermelody in the second layer. If I'm understanding this correctly, all of your points pertaining to that section are "corrections" to the notes I have written, but this should clear things up.
Once again, thanks for your help. The files are updated.