Gustnado's Arrangements

[Gustnado]

Hi everyone!

I'm actually new here, so I hope I'm on the right place lol
 
So I wanted to share with you an arrangement from the fifth stage's theme from Touhou DDC : "The Shining Needle Castle Sinking In The Air".

So here it is. I tried to make it not to hard to play and with fairly accurate dynamics.

MIDI File :
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ZAQ0iPmLbZqs1au9bPZoaZW9aYvQt7Ha/view?usp=drive_link

PDF:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1oUaNRSMK06lfKr5xEnCdb2GzfRK_zY-m/view?usp=drive_link

However, when I first done the arrangement (mostly by memory, even before I transcripted it on Musescore), I came up with a slightly different melody from bar 72 up to bar 92. In my opinion, the original melody sounds a bit weird on the piano. Tell me what you think!

MIDI File :
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1uXl8YxGToyGXDQDDVrSD-zk13es9qMNu/view?usp=drive_link

PDF :
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1eTK_GGTHyi8bhqPbYhZa4ZtA2ouaYhD1/view?usp=drive_link

Original:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v8xtmqN6jpc

[Latios212]

Hello and welcome! Sorry, I peeked at your post but forgot to reply!

However, when I first done the arrangement (mostly by memory, even before I transcripted it on Musescore), I came up with a slightly different melody from bar 72 up to bar 92. In my opinion, the original melody sounds a bit weird on the piano. Tell me what you think!

Were you trying to create your own melody here? The melody you wrote in the first version sounds correct and fine on piano to me!