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FallenPianist's Arrangements (Updated June 29) 2 New Song!

Started by FallenPianist, May 06, 2008, 07:52:12 PM

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FallenPianist

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(Wii)SSBB - "BattleField 2" - FallenPianist
Another song from SSBB, i think it sounds great, plz leave your comments! I change the key sign, plz take a look at it, and leave your comments
http://www.mediafire.com/?jxoxi9hdtl9

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(Wii)SSBB - "Mario Circuit" - FallenPianist
I think the bass line sound better this way, even if some chords sound a little bit odd, but the chords in this song sound odd so...If you have any comments plz post them! I just need to fix the key sig.
http://www.mediafire.com/?oxs9izwn91n
It's the first song i arrange...so plz do not be too rude



(GBA) Pokémon R/S/E - "Leader Maxie/Archie Battle" - Fallenpianist
http://www.mediafire.com/?bfkf3azxzyb

(Wii) Super Mario Galaxy - "Ghostly Galaxy"
Unavailable for now

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(srry for my bad english...i'm french..)

B-Kpianist

well- the melody sounds good, but check some of the chords, they sound odd towards the beginning. I think it needs a key sig and 8va's in certain areas. It sounds good for a first time arrangement!  Keep it up!

FallenPianist

Thanks for the comments!
Yeah, i already know about the chords, i'm actually fixing this. And for the key sig and the 8 va's, i'm using finale note pad, so i don't know how to put them.(but i know the key sig)

B-Kpianist

well- go to finale.com and then under demos, download the printmusic trial. It's a 30 day trial and it is way better than notepad. It's free for 30 days ;)

blah54

i don't mean to offend you in any way but...

the bass (left hand) sounds like a complete mess...

the right hand (melody) is good and fairly accurate, but with that bass, it just sounds ugly and messy, try and tweak the bass somehow, then it'll be much better...
It's on a need-to-know basis that you don't need to know.

FallenPianist

#5
ok, thanks for you comments!
I already know about the bass line, and i'm fixing it now

Edit: finish to modify the bass line, i think it sounds better this way, plz can some of you listen it and leave comments? Now i'm starting BattleField 2 from SSBB

FallenPianist

Finish The BAttlefield Arrangement, plz listen it, and leave your comments, now starting Archie/Maxie Battle from Pokémon R/S/E

Lildigipoke2

i think the bass line just sounds weird....to me at least in Mario Circuit....also Battefield the bass line at the end of the first page sounds weird..i don't know....in general, they're good as the first sheets you've ever arranged


CHOCOLATEEEEEEE

PseudoMario16

the battlefield and mario circuit ones were pretty good overall

also good luck with the maxie battle, thats gonna be pretty hard
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e1dvSlvZLG8 - its... its... beautiful!

Sirus

great arrangments
but something sounds bare in battlefield 2
but great overall!

FallenPianist

Thanks for you comments! I will look for the bass line in Battlefield and Mario Circuit and try to improve it


PianoMan

Your English really isn't that bad...

Battlefield 2 sounds good, but, like others said, the left hand sounds a little off. and the melody on measures 39-50 sound questionable. If you have the time, it would look better if you changed those one or two sharps into flats. But you've done a great job so far! I tried this one. I quit because it was too complicated.

FallenPianist

Thanks for you comments, i will check for measure 39 to 50. I was also thinking that they were a little bit odd...lol

Thanks again!

FallenPianist

#13
I finally finished Maxie/Archie battle, the song need a key change, and maybe some correction.


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