Arrangement Project (Paper Mario)

[The Deku Trombonist]

Oh yeah this thing, whoops. So here's some random feedback

Princess in Distress:
-B Natural in bar 4 instead of Cb
-Db instead of C# in bar 23
-Could do with some articulations in the LH (long short short)
-17 might make more sense as a quarter note-quarter rest-quarter note with a tenuto over the first beat maybe?
-And putting the whole thing up an octave might capture the music box feel better

[Sebastian]

Ok deku
I'll get right on that

[The Deku Trombonist]

More feedback. I'm hoping to get this up soon-ish

Attack on the Koopa Bros. (Don Valentino)

• You've used Eb everywhere except bar 14 RH where there's a D#....
• Perhaps write out a rhythm for the last 3 bars?

[DonValentino]

Thank you! How's this? https://db.tt/kH4pe4d2

[The Deku Trombonist]

Was there meant to be something at the end?

[DonValentino]

Umm... I added a rhythm like you pointed out. Aside that, I believe not.

Sorry, I don't really know what you mean.

[The Deku Trombonist]

Umm... I added a rhythm like you pointed out

Oh...cos when I opened it the last few bars were still empty

[DonValentino]

Well yeah, I don't know how to add percussion in the same piano staff, so I created another staff with percussion and hid it.

[Olimar12345]

[facepalm]

[FierceDeity]

Currently trying in vain to find your quote about this not being ninmidimusic, olimar

[braix]

Currently trying in vain to find your quote about this not being ninmidimusic, olimar

In the thread "Dynamics in different parts" under feedback. It only took me 30 seconds to find...

...it shouldnt matter how finale plays our sheets, they're ment primarily for visual purposes-to be played at a piano. this isnt "Ninmidimusic" ...

[Sebastian]

Oh yeah this thing, whoops. So here's some random feedback

Princess in Distress:
-B Natural in bar 4 instead of Cb
-Db instead of C# in bar 23
-Could do with some articulations in the LH (long short short)
-17 might make more sense as a quarter note-quarter rest-quarter note with a tenuto over the first beat maybe?
-And putting the whole thing up an octave might capture the music box feel better

Fixed

Oh and This song is replacing "Invitation to the Castle" (Its the same song but with the wrong name)

[The Deku Trombonist]

Woah, ease up there everyone.

Well yeah, I don't know how to add percussion in the same piano staff, so I created another staff with percussion and hid it.

Just write it in using notes (both hands if you want) and I'll fix up the playback/presentation for you.

[Sebastian]

Woah, ease up there everyone.

?

[The Deku Trombonist]

I added some of the sheets that need to be replaced to the list of songs in the OP. It'd be really cool if they could be replaced in this project, after all we don't want people reading about our amazing project only to still find crap sheets.