Arrangement Project (Paper Mario)

[JesterMusician]

Sounds pretty good! A couple things:

• "Pursuit"
• I'd write a courtesy natural on the E in Measure 4, as well as on the A's in Measure 7.
• Measure 6 (and similar figures): I would write the 3rd beat note explicitly and start the glissando half a beat later (assuming it's playable on piano).
• The first chord of 15 should be C-G, not C-F#.
• The 3rd beat of 26 sounds faster than 16ths; it sounds like four runs of 32nds, so I'd use a trill there on G# (writing the trill note A in parentheses for clarity).
• Consider separating the dynamics for 13 on, since the bass doesn't change volume while the melody does.

[Sebastian]

Okey doke.
I'll get these when I get on my computer

[Sebastian]

Sounds pretty good! A couple things:

• "Pursuit"
• I'd write a courtesy natural on the E in Measure 4, as well as on the A's in Measure 7.
• Measure 6 (and similar figures): I would write the 3rd beat note explicitly and start the glissando half a beat later (assuming it's playable on piano).
• The first chord of 15 should be C-G, not C-F#.
• The 3rd beat of 26 sounds faster than 16ths; it sounds like four runs of 32nds, so I'd use a trill there on G# (writing the trill note A in parentheses for clarity).
• Consider separating the dynamics for 13 on, since the bass doesn't change volume while the melody does.

Fixed

Next one!
Tubba Blubba's Castle - Nacho2420 -  Mus, PDF, and MIDI

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=6ldGmGoTLXQ

[Sebastian]

Fixed

Next one!
Tubba Blubba's Castle - Nacho2420 -  Mus, PDF, and MIDI

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=6ldGmGoTLXQ

Except for the url.....it looks good to me!
Anyone else have any thoughts?

[nacho2420]

Fixed the url!

[Sebastian]

Ok!
If anyone else doesn't have any thoughts.....we shall move on!

[Sebastian]

Underground Pipes - Bloop -MUS ZIP


https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=8EXsRAC2ISE

[DonValentino]

Dynamics, url and tempo marking.

[Sebastian]

Doesn't the right hand sound odd to anyone?
Or is it just me?

[Bloop]

Doesn't the right hand sound odd to anyone?
Or is it just me?

That's just the weird percussion instruments translated to piano, it does sound weird

Fixed the url and other stuff though! [ZIP]

[Sebastian]

That's just the weird percussion instruments translated to piano, it does sound weird

Fixed the url and other stuff though! [ZIP]

Excellent!

[Sebastian]

Ooooook!
Last one!

Whale Ride - mariolegofan - ZIP


https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=lXXBhFxTgYg

[JesterMusician]

Measure 7: RH C-A should be E-C.
Measure 12: RH Bb should have a courtesy flat.

Other than that, looks pretty good!

[Sebastian]

Awesome! I'll get on it when I get on my computer

[Tobbeh99]

Ooooook!
Last one!

Whale Ride - mariolegofan - ZIP


https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=lXXBhFxTgYg

It would be amazing if you could get the guitar arpeggios in the bass as well, it would make the arrangement a bit more light and lively, I think.