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Author Topic: [DELETED] [PC] Undertale - "Battle Against a True Hero" by Maelstrom  (Read 1432 times)

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Series: Other
Game: Undertale
Console: PC
Title: Battle Against a True Hero
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Maelstrom
« Last Edit: December 09, 2015, 07:43:24 PM by Latios212 »
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Re: [PC] Undertale - "Battle Against a True Hero" by Maelstrom
« Reply #1 on: December 03, 2015, 08:30:46 PM »

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Re: [PC] Undertale - "Battle Against a True Hero" by Maelstrom
« Reply #2 on: December 03, 2015, 10:37:06 PM »

The four-measure phrase beginning at m13-16 repeats 4 times before the next melody comes in. You only have it repeat 3 times.

There are some missing harmonies I think could be incorporated into the right hand, notably near the very end.
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Re: [PC] Undertale - "Battle Against a True Hero" by Maelstrom
« Reply #3 on: December 04, 2015, 01:18:38 AM »

The first 12 measures:

Maybe make some sort of tremolo, 2 notes instead of 1, in the RH melody as in the original.
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Re: [PC] Undertale - "Battle Against a True Hero" by Maelstrom
« Reply #4 on: December 09, 2015, 07:47:53 PM »

The four-measure phrase beginning at m13-16 repeats 4 times before the next melody comes in. You only have it repeat 3 times.
Nice catch. Fixed.

There are some missing harmonies I think could be incorporated into the right hand, notably near the very end.
Would you like to try inserting them?

The first 12 measures:

Maybe make some sort of tremolo, 2 notes instead of 1, in the RH melody as in the original.
I agree it's there, but the notation would get pretty messy as many of the notes are dotted-sixteenths in length. Suggestions oh how to write it out?
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Re: [PC] Undertale - "Battle Against a True Hero" by Maelstrom
« Reply #5 on: December 09, 2015, 09:09:09 PM »

I see what you mean. If you want to write them out I suggest either:

1) Small grace notes like this sheet: http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/pdf/2578

2) Tremolo with 2 slashes (means to play it as 16th notes) and if you with 2 dots above, as to play 2 notes during the duration of that note. Like this:
https://musescore.org/sites/musescore.org/files/NotationExample_StemSlashWithDotsAbove_small.png

It also depends how correct you want to be to the original. I think just 2 notes instead of one works fine. The only problem is the two 8ths at the end.

Also speaking of the first measures RH. Would it be better with staccatos?? I feel like that melody has a very light feel. It could also be good contrasting it from the later part at measure 14 which has more weight.
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