Should be good! Tell me if I missed anything.
Debate topic for next Tuesday: Are cannons truly valid instruments for an orchestra? Or should they be replaced with something safer, like Tesla coils?
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Show posts MenuQuote from: Bloop on January 10, 2022, 09:18:22 AM-m25 and on: In the L.H. you sometimes use staccato+tenuto markings, but I think it may be better to just cut off an 8th of these note lengths (like you did in page 1 anyway). You sometimes have these markings on the ends of ties too, but that's not necessary either; articulation markings for piano sheet music should never go on the ends of ties. For the staccato+tenutos on the ends of ties that are 8th notes, you can just remove the articulations without changing the lengths of the notes. This also applies to the R.H. from m37 and on too.I've reworked some of the tenuto stuff, but I do believe during the sections with the big chords that a few of them deserve the articulation, 'cause they do sound longer than just eighth notes alone and slightly shorter than quarters.
Quote from: Whoppybones on December 30, 2021, 10:09:27 AM-m20-21, I hear more notes than just the octaves. True, they're beneath the octaves in the original, but you could probably place them in the middle of the octaves without much trouble, kinda like how you moved the electric piano voice up an octave.I think I got it. Should be all updated!
Quote from: Bloop on December 21, 2021, 02:06:52 AM-m21: The flat of the Eb on beat 1.5 in the R.H. is touching the note before.I moved it, but if it's too close to the other flat, let me know.
Quote from: Bloop on December 20, 2021, 05:55:37 AM-m5 (and similar measures): On beat 3, you can also use a dotted 8th rest instead of 8th+16th rests, to make the beat a bit compacter and easier to read. If you prefer them non-dotted, that's fine too! Same applies to the L.H. in m41.I'll leave it as is.
Quote from: Bloop on December 20, 2021, 05:55:37 AM-m30: I hear a C on top in the R.H. on beat 2.75 (maybe instead of the Bb but I'm not 100% sure about that). Also, I hear a G instead of an Ab on beat 3.25. Also also, I hear a Dn instead of a Db in the L.H. on beat 4.5.I hear the top note as Bb all the way through, though the G sounds accurate. In addition to the D natural, I think I hear the note before being a C instead of another D natural.
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