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Quote from: Kricketune54 on April 08, 2024, 07:20:09 PMI hear Cn in the instances I pointed out for Screwbot 2 but they sound like Bn's here. In my opinion they should be Cn's in Screwbot 2 because they are literally audible as such and here I understand the reasoning for making them Bn's.

I still hear them as C's here, but the reasoning behind making them Bn's in this one also applies to Screwbot Factory 2, since Lat's point was about the major 7th sounding muddy at that octave. Personally, I think the major 7th sounds fine. Either way, since Lat's critique applies to both sheets, I would still like to keep them consistent with each other since I hear them as the same notes in both songs using AudioStretch.

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Submission Archive / Re: [SW] Pokémon Scarlet & Pok...

Last post by XiaoMigros - April 10, 2024, 05:47:50 AM

Notes:

m6: Not hearing the Eb at beat 1 RH
m7: Hearing C4 instead of G at LH beat 1, and a C3 at beat 2.5
m9 & 13: The B at beat 1 in the RH sounds an octave lower
m10 & 14: The Bb at beat 1 in the RH sounds an octave lower
m11: I think I hear D4 at beat 1?
m15: I hear Bb3 and D4 instead of F4 at beat 1
m18: The high LH Bb could be cross-staved? The beam can stay below the staff as to not add extra clutter
m18: Beat 4 in the RH should have a D instead of F
m23: I hear additional A3s at beat 3 and possibly 4.5

Presentation

m2: Thoughts on making the RH lower layer part of the LH? I think it's most comfortable to play that way and also visually looks better. You could start using the treble clef in m1 as well
m7: The tuplet number in the LH seems too high up (in the PDF at least)
m5, 9, && 11: Very nitpicky but these markings could be more appropriately centered between staves. The text expressions can also start slightly before the notes

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