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#91
Submission Archive / Re: [SW] Super Mario Bros. Won...
Last post by Zeta - May 30, 2024, 09:03:39 PM
This submission has been accepted by XiaoMigros.

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#92
Submission Archive / Re: [SW] Super Mario Bros. Won...
Last post by XiaoMigros - May 30, 2024, 09:03:33 PM
Alright, I see that^^ I have nothing else to add, consider this accepted!
#93
The Werewolf Game / Re: TWG CXXIII Player Will-Be'...
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#94
Submissions / Re: [MUL] Paranormasight: The ...
Last post by Kricketune54 - May 30, 2024, 10:14:11 AM
Okay gotcha. Yeah that looks good now and that work as far as the trills for me. Do have a few more things I reviewed and wanted to run by you.

• m3 LH the lower octave F# might be a little better if you moved it up to a Bn. Then have it restrike on beat 3 as well. Could do m3-4 like this:
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• m14 RH I think you could add an upper octave here of the Bn
• At m26 LH, I think beat 3 sounds more like down an octave.
• Looking at m28 again, I think RH 2.5 the An should go to the second layer, and the Fn stay in layer 1. Currently it looks a little confusing, and I think this will show the melody/harmony separation a bit better.
#95
Submissions / Re: [NDS] Pokémon Black Versio...
Last post by Kricketune54 - May 30, 2024, 09:34:02 AM
Sorry for a bit of a wait here.

• Both composer names could fit on one line. And can be written Junichi Masuda and Go Ichinose
• Lowercase the "by" in "Arranged by"
• bars 1-5 look scrunched up currently. Overall, I think 4-3-3-3-4 could be a better measure/system distribution for this piece.
• for the pickup measure, there is a second line of notes you could add to the LH, or at the very least the drum part leading into m1.
    •  Speaking of which, the pickup measure should be separated from the rest of the measure count (I will refer to measure #'s as is though)
• It's very hard to tell but I think m2-4 the first note is a Cb.
• m5 RH beat 4.66 I hear a Cn 8th note as a pickup into m6
• m6 second layer I hear the following screenshot (can clean up layers a bit)
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• In m7 RH 2nd layer I hear the Fn restrike twice with the Fn and Cn above it on beats 2.33 and 2.66. Then for beat 3 to end it sounds like the notes played by this clarinet part are just an octave down from the melody.
• m8 RH I would recommend just writing this as a single layer, the dotted quarter note can just be a quarter note
• m9 You could add a trill to beat 3 Fn.
• m10-11 RH I am not sure I hear the notes you have outside of the last two 8th notes of each measure. What are the other RH notes based off of, partwise?
• m11 LH very subtle but on beat 2.66 I hear a separate Eb leading into beat 3
• m12 RH beat 1 you could add a trill to this note
• m14-15 LH you probably could work in a second layer, similar to m12-13
#96
Submission Archive / Re: [3DS] Pokémon X & Pokémon ...
Last post by Zeta - May 30, 2024, 09:27:07 AM
This submission has been accepted by Bloop.

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#97
Submission Archive / Re: [3DS] Pokémon X & Pokémon ...
Last post by Bloop - May 30, 2024, 09:27:00 AM
Agreed, I'll accept!
#98
Submission Archive / Re: [Wii] Wii Play - "Title Sc...
Last post by Kricketune54 - May 30, 2024, 08:42:09 AM
Quote from: Latios212 on May 29, 2024, 06:11:32 PM- I'm not sure I hear the first RH G in m. 19... it isn't as present as the other notes. I think I hear an Ab in the harmony here, does that sound too weird? vs. just keeping the G or maybe just omitting the RH here
I am not hearing an Ab in the harmony. Does not sound like it would fit. But I agree on relistening that the RH 1.0 Gn seems like it is not actually there.
#99
Submission Archive / Re: [3DS] Pokémon X & Pokémon ...
Last post by Kricketune54 - May 30, 2024, 08:36:00 AM
Change looks good!
#100
Submissions / Re: [MUL] Paranormasight: The ...
Last post by Metamyrrh - May 30, 2024, 02:04:06 AM
Thanks for taking a look, sorry for the delayed response! And, sorry, I misunderstood what you meant for the tremolos in m15-17. I tried out what you were thinking and found those tremolos quite awkward to play in that spot. I think a trill is easier to play and gives a similar impression (when executed with the dynamics you notated). Does that work? Also, I added the slur to m32!

Here are the changed files: https://www.mediafire.com/file/729wgpi2uxcgk8o/I'll+be+close+by+v4.zip/file