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I'm sorry, but we won't be allowing this for the project. The deadline mentioned in the project post (here) had passed over an hour ago. We've had more lenient deadlines in the past, but that resulted in a few cases where people were frantically submitting sheets slightly late. I chose a specific time for the deadline to avoid this.

This is to ensure the updaters have enough time to review each sheet (and for arrangers to respond) to post the update on the 31st. Thanks for your understanding.

Feel free to put this in subs instead.

"Prison Island"
Xenoblade Chronicles

Composed by Manami Kiyota
Arranged by JZ

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Yeah, Finale can be a little silly when it comes to slurs sometimes - it doesn't look like it'll automatically make them look nice here. How's something like this?

- I think the Bn's in the LH of m. 24/32 should be Cb's (Cbmaj7 chord)

Don't forget the ones in the beat 2 chords too!

- I think beat 3 LH of m. 53 is just a quarter note Ab (instead of tying over the Gb and striking the Ab on beat 3.5)

Just a quarter note instead of two eighths here, I think?

Hey sorry for not getting back on this since last week but basically college work is slamming me hard atm. Not sure when I'll be able to have time but it might take a few days.

Good thing is, there's a recent update so this doesn't have the same deadline to be summited at least.

The deadline for submissions has closed, so we are no longer accepting any new sheets for this project.

It looks like the original YouTube link is dead now, does anyone have a substitute before I go looking for one?

Wow, that's a lot of stuff I had to fix haha. It was really hard figuring out some of the other voices and I don't know if I would've done it without your help. Thanks for the feedback, I'm pretty sure I fixed all of the suggested changes. It's weird, now it sounds "less" accurate now that I have some of the other harmonies in but that's probably just due to the instrument changes.

-m4:Weirdly, I hear the rhythm guitar riff as an Ab instead of a G? It doesn't make sense in a metal riff like this though, and the bass does play G.

Yeah I noticed that too. I honestly think it's just the guitar distortion making it slightly out of tune. It's like a G half sharp.

-m51:Also, the trumpets do something different in this bar, though it doesn't fit as well with the guitar part.

Yeah, I agonized over this measure more than any other. Nothing I did sounded "right."

Anyway please let me know if there's anything else I need to fix!

So the "Miscellaneous arrangements" section is just to make forum posts about it but not to actually upload them to the site?

Hi Phlimbob, welcome to NinSheetMusic! When submitting a sheet, it'd be nice if you place a post with a youtube link of the song, just to save us updaters a little time :p This should be the right song:

The way we updaters work around here is looking at your sheet and look for little errors or formatting stuff that needs to be fixed. After two updaters have looked at it thoroughly, the sheet will be accepted and submitted to the site in the soonest update!

Anyway, up to my comments:
-You could move the tempo mark up a bit, so it's not as close to the notes.
-m1, L.H.: I hear the bottom note on beat 4 as an E instead of a G#.
-m3: It's a bit hard to hear which notes are the melody and which are just the accompaniment, but it may be a bit easier to have the L.H. play the lower notes of the R.H. and keep the R.H. to a one note melody. I also hear an additional B on beat 3:

-m5: I think you can leave the bracketed note out (same in m.7), as it doesn't add much to the performance. Also, same as in m1, I hear the bottom note of beat 4 as an E. Maybe you could do some stuff with different layers here too, regarding the held notes.
-m7: I think I hear this bar like this:

-m9-16: It looks like switched the octaves of the arpeggio and the second voice, which is a nice touch! You could add even more of the notes of the second voice, to create a cool countermelody:

I think you can figure that out for m13-16 too! Also, it may look nice to add slurs to the L.H. in each bar, these wavy arpeggio figures look great slurred:

For the last measure, you can just slur the first note in the L.H. to the last note in the R.H. Make sure to edit the slur a bit so it doesn't touch the half rest in the L.H., though.
-m12: I fixed this in my example pic above too, but the tied A's and G# in the R.H. would work better as a second layer.
-m13: Is there a specific reason you didn't make the E on beat 3 in the R.H. a half note too? If you do so, you could also slur these two bars like you did with m9-10.
-m16: You should change the two quarter rests to a half rest
-Lastly, it looks like you decreased the page size to 83%. This has made the text smaller too, though. If you want smaller systems, it's better to use "Resize Staff Systems (System Reduction)" in the Page Layout tool. It works the same as the Resize Pages dialog box, except it only affects the music staves and not the whole page.