[PC] Undertale - "Absolutely Overfamiliar Shrine" by Th3Gavst3r

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Submission Information:
Series: Undertale
Game: Undertale
Console: PC
Title: Absolutely Overfamiliar Shrine
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Th3Gavst3r

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[Th3Gavst3r]

[Libera]

The same comment about the margins applies over here too.

Other than that...

-The bass in bar 1/3 should look like this I think:

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-You might want a courtesy natural on the first left hand C in bars 2/4.

[Latios212]

dogsong x super mario sunshine

-The bass in bar 1/3 should look like this I think:

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-You might want a courtesy natural on the first left hand C in bars 2/4.

I think these would be better written as Bn, since it's chromatically ascending and maintaining the D-F harmony above it. Also wouldn't need courtesy accidentals.

Other than that:
- Use dotted eighths instead of 16th-tied-8th in m. 1-3

[Th3Gavst3r]

The same comment about the margins applies over here too.

Fixed them

- Use dotted eighths instead of 16th-tied-8th in m. 1-3

Less busy yes

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-The bass in bar 1/3 should look like this I think:

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I think these would be better written as Bn, since it's chromatically ascending and maintaining the D-F harmony above it. Also wouldn't need courtesy accidentals.

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Went with Bb in the RH over Bn in the left. Added a courtesy Bb on LH in m3

-You might want a courtesy natural on the first left hand C in bars 2/4.

Changes from above make this unnecessary

[Latios212]

Same comment about the left margin as in the other one, otherwise looks good!

[Th3Gavst3r]

Same comment about the left margin as in the other one, otherwise looks good!

Fixed

[Libera]

Added a courtesy Bb on LH in m3

I'm not sure this courtesy is particularly necessary, but it's not a problem.  I can accept with or without it.

[Th3Gavst3r]

I'm not sure this courtesy is particularly necessary, but it's not a problem.  I can accept with or without it.

Took it out. Is it not necessary just because of distance from the last accidental?

[Libera]

Took it out. Is it not necessary just because of distance from the last accidental?

Distance from the previous accidental, the right hand plays multiple Bb's in between (+ a Bb in the right hand at the same time) and it's on a new system so the key signature is right there.  Seems pretty hard to get it wrong to me.

I'll accept now!

[Zeta]

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