mastersuperfan's Halloween Sheet

[mastersuperfan]

[3DS] Paper Mario: Sticker Star - "Boo Night Fever"

[MUSX]

[cashwarrior1]

Why didn't you add in the boo laugh 🤣

Also, on measure 10 beat 4.5 in the rh I'm hearing a D played in the solo. It sounds soft but I'm pretty sure there is an articulation there (well, as articulate as you can get when slurring)

[Latios212]

Nice sheet! This one has been on my "maybe to do for Halloween" list for a while now...

- I'm not sure I hear a Cn>D motion between the chords in each pair at the beginning? Would it do to just write both in the RH for all the chords or do you hear that movement in one of the voices?
- m. 4 plays F#m7 throughout the whole measure, so not sure if the B in the last chord really fits

Also, on measure 10 beat 4.5 in the rh I'm hearing a D played in the solo. It sounds soft but I'm pretty sure there is an articulation there (well, as articulate as you can get when slurring)

Hmm I think I hear this pretty softly. I would suggest writing it in as a grace note or just leaving it out.

Why didn't you add in the boo laugh 🤣

I definitely hear this in the original

[mastersuperfan]

- I'm not sure I hear a Cn>D motion between the chords in each pair at the beginning? Would it do to just write both in the RH for all the chords or do you hear that movement in one of the voices?

I'm still hearing this, but it's pretty buried in all the horns (I hear it in the left ear, if that helps). I didn't notice it until Radiak pointed it out to me. That said, looking at it again, it might be pretty hard to play the Cn>D so quickly in between the ninth, so I'd be open to changing it to just D for playability's sake.

- m. 4 plays F#m7 throughout the whole measure, so not sure if the B in the last chord really fits

Some of the horns do play the same chord throughout, but there's also a voice higher up that harmonizes the melody in thirds and plays a B on the last chord.

Hmm I think I hear this pretty softly. I would suggest writing it in as a grace note or just leaving it out.

I added it as a grace note.

File updated!

[Latios212]

Sounds gooood

[Bloop]

Spoiler

king boo-gie

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-m5: Maybe you could rewrite the D#'s in this bar to Eb's (except for the one on beat 2), so they resolve more nicely to the Dn in m6.
-m9: I hear the C# on beat 2.75 as a B.
-m13-14: Maybe you could add a few accents on the solo during the scale runs:
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-m17: The trumpet soli here are written in the same octave as the original, but in m2-8 you have written it an octave lower. Maybe it's better to transpose this last bar down an octave too, so this bar is in the same range as the beginning.

I'm still hearing this, but it's pretty buried in all the horns (I hear it in the left ear, if that helps). I didn't notice it until Radiak pointed it out to me. That said, looking at it again, it might be pretty hard to play the Cn>D so quickly in between the ninth, so I'd be open to changing it to just D for playability's sake.

I can hear this motion too, and I think it's playable enough too, so it's fine to me!

[mastersuperfan]

-m5: Maybe you could rewrite the D#'s in this bar to Eb's (except for the one on beat 2), so they resolve more nicely to the Dn in m6.
-m9: I hear the C# on beat 2.75 as a B.
-m17: The trumpet soli here are written in the same octave as the original, but in m2-8 you have written it an octave lower. Maybe it's better to transpose this last bar down an octave too, so this bar is in the same range as the beginning.

Updated!

-m13-14: Maybe you could add a few accents on the solo during the scale runs:
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Other than the first note, I'm not hearing any of the notes as accented compared to the others, so I think I'm just going to keep this as is.

[Bloop]

I can hear the second one pretty clearly too, but they do tend to be less indistinguishable as the run goes on. Anyway, I'll accept it then! You cannot view this attachment.