[PC] OneShot - "The Prophecy" by Francesca Minasi

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Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: OneShot
Console: PC
Title: The Prophecy
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Francesca Minasi

[Francesca]

This track plays during Niko's first interaction with Prophetbot, and it is almost the same as Phosphor, but starting immediately with percussion and with the front instruments removed: in the soundtrack, the two are separated, and I decided to write them in different arrangements aswell because the exclusion of the instruments makes a simpler way of performing possible (in Phosphor, I had to remove some notes to make it possible to play others, especially in the percussion parts).

[Whoppybones]

I believe in the RH of m1-16, all the notes are tonic chords. I also think they would sound better an octave up, as that top note is what my mind immediately focused on.
In m21/23 b1, I think there are two notes played at the same time, similar to m17/19

As with my suggestions on Phosphor, I think it would be good to move the percussion along with the other hand as well just to avoid clashing. Sure, the actual notes of the percussion in the song don't change, but percussion clashes less as percussion than it does as piano, so I think that would be nice.

As with the other one, this is a great sheet! I look forward to seeing it finished with revisions and getting on the main site!

[Francesca]

I believe in the RH of m1-16, all the notes are tonic chords. I also think they would sound better an octave up, as that top note is what my mind immediately focused on.
In m21/23 b1, I think there are two notes played at the same time, similar to m17/19

I moved the notes an octave up and added the thirds in m21 and m23; however, it doesn't seem to me like there are only tonic chords in m1-16...

As with my suggestions on Phosphor, I think it would be good to move the percussion along with the other hand as well just to avoid clashing. Sure, the actual notes of the percussion in the song don't change, but percussion clashes less as percussion than it does as piano, so I think that would be nice.

I shifted the bass just like in Phosphor.

Thank you for the feedback!

[cashwarrior1]

Sorry for the wait!

• I'm hearing more/different notes for all the chords:
   - m1 An below the En
   - m5 The entire chord an octave above with an En on top (it should stay in the same octave as the previous one)
   - m9 En above the Bn
   - m13 Cn below the Gn
• m17 rh b1 - This pad instrument is playing chords and I'm hearing a E minor. The melody doesn't seem to play the Cn here.
• m19 rh b1 - Hearing a Cmaj7 chord.
• m23 rh b1 - I'm hearing an An instead of Gn and En below that.
• Any particular reason the lh in m17 to the end is not down an octave like the rest?

[Francesca]

I'm hearing more/different notes for all the chords:
 - m1 An below the En
 - m5 The entire chord an octave above with an En on top (it should stay in the same octave as the previous one)
 - m9 En above the Bn
 - m13 Cn below the Gn
m17 rh b1 - This pad instrument is playing chords and I'm hearing a E minor. The melody doesn't seem to play the Cn here.
m19 rh b1 - Hearing a Cmaj7 chord.
m23 rh b1 - I'm hearing an An instead of Gn and En below that.

Ok, I made these changes! I always try to listen closely to the chords when writing arrangements, but it's still very difficult for me to find all the exact notes...

Any particular reason the lh in m17 to the end is not down an octave like the rest?

I made it that way simply because I thought it would have been too low otherwise.

Thanks for the feedback!

[cashwarrior1]

Ah okay, that makes sense. It looks good to me, I'll approve!