[GB] Game & Watch Gallery - "Manhole" by ShyYoshiGuy

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Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Game & Watch Gallery
Console: Game Boy
Title: Manhole
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: ShyYoshiGuy

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[Olimar12345]

Be sure to post the YouTube video in a reply when you submit something. This is so we can check to see if the notes/rhythms etc. are correct.

[Olimar12345]

Looking at this a little more closely, there are some spots that you could incorporate more of the harmony in relatively easily:
-Measures 11-12 (and the same thing at 19-20) you can add the third above.
-Measures 29-34 leave plenty of room down below to add the missing voice.

Here's an edition that includes the above suggestions: https://www.dropbox.com/s/b50zof41xt467yu/Manhole_2018-1234567.mus?dl=1

Additionally, some might suggest using an 8va, but I don't think it's necessary. Pretty much everywhere up high in this arrangement works its way up scalular-ly, and the off-set octave jump that comes with adding an 8va would be more harm than potentially lowering other things.

[ShyYoshiGuy]

I have updated the submission as you suggested.

[Olimar12345]

Excellent. I approve of this submission.

[Maelstrom]

I was going to suggest an 8va, but olimar brought up a valid point and I agree with it.

Additionally, some might suggest using an 8va, but I don't think it's necessary. Pretty much everywhere up high in this arrangement works its way up scalular-ly, and the off-set octave jump that comes with adding an 8va would be more harm than potentially lowering other things.

Otherwise, this is an excellent first submission. Great job.

Accepted

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Maelstrom.

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