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Author Topic: ShyYoshiGuy's Arrangements (New: Main Theme - Yoshi's Crafted World)  (Read 711 times)

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Re: ShyYoshiGuy's Arrangements (New: Main Theme - Yoshi's Crafted World)
« Reply #17 on: June 01, 2019, 08:25:50 PM »

Ok, I have a new sheet. It's not perfect, some parts are definitely wrong, but it's the best I could figure out.
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Re: ShyYoshiGuy's Arrangements (New: Main Theme - Yoshi's Crafted World)
« Reply #18 on: June 15, 2019, 11:09:48 PM »

For future reference, it'd help to post what your new sheet is in the current post so people can more easily see what it is!

It's a good start, but needs a considerable amount of work. The good news is that most of what you wrote is correct.

A few major things that popped out to me initially are:
- The whole song should be in swing. Here's a file with the marking added and affecting playback
- The melody's rhythm is incorrect in measure 8
- In some places you have the left hand playing the same notes as the right hand but a couple of octaves lower. This makes the song sound quite empty, and there's generally something else you can do (for example in measure 8, there are bass notes from the voice you were writing in before that you didn't include).
- We could make the left hand part more interesting - for instance there are offbeat notes in another voice that we could put in the left hand of the first 7ish measures and other similar parts.

This is just to get you started, feel free to ask about anything (particularly the parts that you know aren't good).
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