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Author Topic: [3DS] Rhythm Heaven Megamix - "First Contact" by ThatHiddenCharacter  (Read 120 times)

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Series: Rhythm Heaven
Game: Rhythm Heaven Megamix
Console: Nintendo 3DS
Title: First Contact
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: ThatHiddenCharacter
« Last Edit: September 12, 2019, 03:06:02 AM by ThatHiddenCharacter »
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Re: [3DS] Rhythm Heaven Megamix - "First Contact" by ThatHiddenCharacter
« Reply #1 on: September 03, 2019, 05:18:17 AM »

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Re: [3DS] Rhythm Heaven Megamix - "First Contact" by ThatHiddenCharacter
« Reply #2 on: September 07, 2019, 05:24:51 PM »

Looks pretty good. Bunch of small things:

- The first measure sounds unusually empty. Try filling out the Am chord a bit more to reflect the original better.
- m. 2 beat 3 dyads should be C-F not D-f (F chord)
- Is there a reason you have the melod in m. 19+/25+ an octave lower and the chord in m. 21+ an octave higher than in the original?
- I suggest slurring your grace notes to the next melody note in m. 21 and 28
- m. 21 beat 4.5 LH should be a rest
- m. 22 beat 4 LH sounds like A-G-E-B instead of what you have written?
- Melody in beat 24 - I think the A on beat 2 should be two 16th notes instead of one eighth note, and conversely I think the E on beat 3 should only be one eighth note instead of two sixteenths.
- The mordent in m. 27/31 should be flattened (i.e. to indicate D-Eb-D instead of D-E-D). Feel free to ask if you need help getting that symbol.
- m. 36 LH - B should be flat and C# should be natural
- Small suggestion - 4 systems on page 1 and 5 on page 2 to use the space more effectively. Right now there's a disproportionately small amount of space around the footer and page 2 header (something I suggest you check for all your sheets - been seeing similar potential improvements across other recent submissions too).
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Re: [3DS] Rhythm Heaven Megamix - "First Contact" by ThatHiddenCharacter
« Reply #3 on: September 12, 2019, 03:09:31 AM »

Files have been updated.

Also, in m24 beat 2.5 (and so on), I hear two E's play there distinctly (as does E. Gadd), but Latios does not. I was hoping that another Updater could provide some input there as well. It's at about 0:52 in the video.
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Re: [3DS] Rhythm Heaven Megamix - "First Contact" by ThatHiddenCharacter
« Reply #4 on: September 12, 2019, 11:48:10 PM »

Cool. I approve given that whoever checks this next verifies this:

Also, in m24 beat 2.5 (and so on), I hear two E's play there distinctly (as does E. Gadd), but Latios does not. I was hoping that another Updater could provide some input there as well. It's at about 0:52 in the video.

(Also think the music on page 2 could be moved down away from the header a bit more since there's ample space at the bottom, but I won't hold up the submission over it)
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Re: [3DS] Rhythm Heaven Megamix - "First Contact" by ThatHiddenCharacter
« Reply #5 on: September 14, 2019, 12:41:37 AM »

A few things:

-I agree with Latios on bar 24.  I don't hear the E on beat 3.25.
-The forte in bar 1 could be better lined up with the notes.
-I also agree that you could spread things out a bit more on page 2 since you've got a lot more space at the bottom then you do at the top.
-There are more harmonies that you include pretty much everywhere, but if you've left them out to make the right hand easier to play then that's fair enough.  Though I would at least beef the final bar up to being a full A minor chord, like you did for the start.
-I'm not sure the crescendo marking in bar 34 is really worth much as it basically only applies to the glissando in the left hand.  I'd just leave it out, personally.
 

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