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Author Topic: [3DS] Bravely Default - "Cave of Darkness" by Maelstrom  (Read 111 times)

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[3DS] Bravely Default - "Cave of Darkness" by Maelstrom
« on: December 23, 2019, 01:05:30 AM »

Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Bravely Default
Console: Nintendo 3DS
Title: Cave of Darkness
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Maelstrom
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Re: [3DS] Bravely Default - "Cave of Darkness" by Maelstrom
« Reply #1 on: December 23, 2019, 01:05:38 AM »


sequel hype

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Re: [3DS] Bravely Default - "Cave of Darkness" by Maelstrom
« Reply #2 on: December 24, 2019, 12:10:18 AM »

Finished Cave of Darkness.
quite the wait :P
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Re: [3DS] Bravely Default - "Cave of Darkness" by Maelstrom
« Reply #3 on: January 16, 2020, 07:27:24 AM »

- Was curious why you lifted the pedal and cut off the chords on beat 4 in m2 and m4 since they ring for the entire measure in the original.
- Have you considered writing in the "echo" notes in m1-12? I think they'd be a nice addition to help it feel more dynamic and less empty.
- I think m6 and m10 should use E# instead of Fn.
- I would consider adding a tremolo in the LH in m20 to replicate the crescendo from the original. (A glissando would be cool to mimic the original, but I don't think it would work really well in a piano transcription given the mood.)
- First two notes in m21 RH should be E and F# (higher than the third note C#).
- Second to last note (beat 4.0) in m21 RH should be E# instead of F.
- Third note (beat 2.5) in m22 RH should be F# instead of E.
- Beat 2.5-4 in m24 RH should be an octave lower.
- There are two sixteenth pickup notes (with harmonies as well) on beat 4.5 in m24 RH.
- There are some faint wind instruments in the background that harmonize with the melody starting from the pickup to m22. I would suggest including these.
- Was also wondering if it would be possible to incorporate some more harmony in the LH from m21-24, since bare octaves don't totally make up for the original orchestration.
- In the first two chords in m26 RH, the highest notes (melody line) should be C and D, not A and B.
- The last three measures should be shifted up one half-beat (the LH notes start on the downbeat).
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