Arrangement Project (Paper Mario)

[mikey]

give it a few days

[Sebastian]

give it a few days

Please. If your not helping the project, please don't say anything.

[Sebastian]

Sorry 
That was rude.

[Bloop]

I'll fix the url when I have time, just move onto the next one

[Sebastian]

Ok!

[Sebastian]

Next.....
File Select (Replacement) - mariolegofan -  ZIP
I did some reworking in this one.
Any feedback?

Original: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hwGlT_6OaXA

[Maelstrom]

Sounds/looks pretty good.

[Sebastian]

Ok!
Anyone else have any thoughts?

[DonValentino]

Well it's pretty good. Just a couple of things:

- In m. 9 you can write "8th-Quarter-8th" instead of tying those two 8ths. You actually did that in m. 14, just with the rest. :J

- M. 1:  You could put a mp and a crescendo to the mf if you want. Also, the way you have it notated doesn't make it very clear, it'd be better if you put a half note pickup measure, an 8th rest, then two 16ths and then the other 4. Lastly, that intro is slightly faster, write that down too.

- There's a lot of empty space below, try not to put the staff that close to the arranger and composer info. When you print it out it looks weird, everything cluttered in the upper part of the page while the bottom part is 90% blank (I talk from own experience).

- The way you have the measures distributed is good, but it's better if you have it 4-5-5-4.

In other words...  https://db.tt/hf42l6ax
Whatcha think?

Gj

[Sebastian]

Yes, I totally agree with your changes.
Thanks for the feedback!

[Sebastian]

Next.....
Hang in There Peach - FireArrow - MUS MIDI PDF

Original: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EHONMO69xE0

[Maelstrom]

The url

[nacho2420]

Lots of wrong bass notes. I fixed em HERE as well as the url and copyright info.

[Bloop]

Btw I fixed Gates of Goomba Castle! [ZIP]

[Sebastian]

Lots of wrong bass notes. I fixed em HERE as well as the url and copyright info.

Thanks Nacho!

Btw I fixed Gates of Goomba Castle! [ZIP]

Awesome!