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[Sebastian]

Anyway, feedback time.

082 - She's Playing Piano - Olimar12345
- I'm hearing an extra note in the first 2 measures (left hand). This?

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Unfortunately, it's a tenth. Didn't know if you left it out on purpose for that very reason. Just a recommendation.

- Beaming. Maybe something like this would be easier to read?

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- I'm hearing this for the last measure:

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081 - An Ending - Zeila
- I believe the Key is F# Minor (3 sharps).

- The B in M. 2, 4, etc. (LH) is shorter than a half note.

- The overall formatting is messy. You have a one measure system here and a 7 measure system there. Maybe play with the formatting until you get a nice measure distribution.

- M. 16 (left hand) is not quite right. There are 4 voices being played on beats 2 & 3: The melody, a harmony in the right hand (which I moved to the left), a melody in the left hand, and the bass. Here is the correct part:

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- M. 22: Missing a note:

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- M. 23: 4th note (LH)(second layer) is a B.

- M. 31: 3rd note (LH) is a D.

- M. 42 (RH; Second Layer): There should be a C# on beat 2.

- M. 51-end (RH): Decide if you're gonna use dyads, triads, or tetrads. A lot of these are made up notes and it's very inconsistent.

- Re-check the articulations throughout the entire piece. I hear a bunch of places that could use staccatos and many notes that should be much shorter than they are. For example (LH), M. 2, 4, 6, 8, 10, etc. should be (staccatoed) quarters instead of halves.


Hopefully, more to come.

[mikey]

how many of the arrangers who flocked here because WOO UNDERTALE are still even here

[Zeila]

Thanks! I'll get to it when I get home, but so you don't end up wasting your time, I already started working on Ruins and Snowdin Town (I doubt I'll cover absolutely everything though)

[Sebastian]

I already started working on Ruins and Snowdin Town (I doubt I'll cover absolutely everything though)

Thank you! That will help us greatly.

[Olimar12345]

how many of the arrangers who flocked here because WOO UNDERTALE are still even here

None.

[WaluigiTime64]

When's "Last Episode" happening? It's listed as "Claimed by mariolegofan", and it's been like that for a while. If it hasn't been done yet, I could take time out of my not-very-busy schedule if Sea-Bass doesn't feel like doing it anytime soon.

[Maelstrom]

how many of the arrangers who flocked here because WOO UNDERTALE are still even here

None.

Th3Gavst3r?

[Sebastian]

When's "Last Episode" happening? It's listed as "Claimed by mariolegofan", and it's been like that for a while. If it hasn't been done yet, I could take time out of my not-very-busy schedule if Sea-Bass doesn't feel like doing it anytime soon.

Hmmm, I thought I did that already. Thanks for the reminder.
I'll have it done after I finish this current arrangement.

Th3Gavst3r?

Also Nebbles, me, and Yug_Guy.

[Latios212]

Th3Gavst3r?

the one and only cool arranger who joined because of Undertale and actually stayed to hang around for other things

praise thee

[mikey]

what about Jester actually I think he came for undertale too or is he just undertale

[Altissimo]

Also Nebbles, me, and Yug_Guy.

lol since when are you an arranger who flocked here for undertale?

[Dudeman]

what about Jester actually I think he came for undertale too or is he just undertale

Um, Jester showed up waaaaayyyyyyy before the Undertale hype.

[Olimar12345]

mlf: reading is hard, yo
Mael: you're right-th3gav is still upon us! We are blessed!
Noc: what dm said: Jester was around before undertale.

[Sebastian]

mlf:

Who's that?

[Th3Gavst3r]

Gotta say I'm super glad Undertale got me here, y'all are awesome