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Author Topic: The Official Pokémon Diamond, Pearl, and Platinum Project  (Read 18203 times)

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Re: The Official Pokémon Diamond, Pearl, and Platinum Project
« Reply #270 on: February 10, 2019, 02:35:33 PM »

Pt14 - Spin Trade - Sebastian [Approved by Latios, accepted by Libera]

Looks great!



21 - Victory! (Trainer Battle) - AmpharosAndy [Approved by Latios, accepted by Libera]

Just fixed the arranger credits: good to go!
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Re: The Official Pokémon Diamond, Pearl, and Platinum Project
« Reply #271 on: February 11, 2019, 12:11:30 AM »

139 - Pokémon League (Night) - Pianist Da Sootopolis [Approved by Libera]

What a beautiful piece.  Arrangement was pretty good, just a few inaccuracies with the repeats and some general formatting stuff.  Good to go!  (I hope it was alright for me to edit this, I don't think I've ever seen you around.)



47 - Victory! (Team Galactic) - AmpharosAndy [Approved by Libera]

Just formatted this and did some visual tweaking.  Looks great!
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Re: The Official Pokémon Diamond, Pearl, and Platinum Project
« Reply #272 on: February 11, 2019, 01:41:00 AM »

80 - Route 201 (Night) - Latios212

Only got two comments:

-In bar 7 and 9 in the second half of the bar you've got an open chord rather than the original which is a full C chord.  My suggestion would be to add the part in that's playing those Es like this:

but something else might work as well.
-Once again, my favourite, http to https.
Sounds good! Updated that.



Accepting:

32 - Battle! (Gym Leader) - Th3Gavst3r [Approved by Libera, accepted by Latios]
Looks great, just added a courtesy natural in the LH G in the second bar.

47 - Victory! (Team Galactic) - AmpharosAndy [Approved by Libera, accepted by Latios]
74 - Trainers' Eyes Meet (Ace Trainer) - Don Valentino [Approved by Libera, accepted by Latios]

99 - Trainers' Eyes Meet (Aroma Lady) - Don Valentino [Approved by Libera, accepted by Latios]

139 - Pokémon League (Night) - Pianist Da Sootopolis [Approved by Libera, accepted by Latios]
Revamped the layout; adjusted some slurs, ties, and articulations, as well as took out the middle repeat section (it was only being used for one measure).



Also Sebastian accepted these but forgot to post.

10 - Victory! (Wild Pokémon) - Th3Gavst3r [Approved by Latios, accepted by Sebastian]
16 - Pokémon Center (Day) - Yug Guy [Approved by Latios, accepted by Sebastian]
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Re: The Official Pokémon Diamond, Pearl, and Platinum Project
« Reply #273 on: February 11, 2019, 01:49:58 AM »

Sounds good! Updated that.

Nice!

80 - Route 201 (Night) - Latios212 [Approved by Libera]

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Re: The Official Pokémon Diamond, Pearl, and Platinum Project
« Reply #274 on: February 11, 2019, 02:53:42 AM »

I approve of 201 night as well
It's a great little piece.

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Re: The Official Pokémon Diamond, Pearl, and Platinum Project
« Reply #275 on: March 24, 2019, 11:03:11 PM »

Finally finished fixing up:

42 - Eterna Forest - Zeila [Approved by Latios]

There were some rhythmic errors and I also balanced the voices a little better in certain places.
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Re: The Official Pokémon Diamond, Pearl, and Platinum Project
« Reply #276 on: March 24, 2019, 11:48:28 PM »

Continuing down the list:

46 - Battle! (Team Galactic Commander) - JDMEK5 [Approved by Latios]

Hope you don't mind, I did a bit of rebalancing of the layout - margins etc. to space everything a bit more evenly. I also removed the overlapping D# in m. 50 (so it now looks like 48) and verified and removed the text about the potentially confusing note (unless that was intended for the performer and not the person checking it?). I personally prefer the descending chromatic line at the beginning over the repetitive one you wrote. It's fine though, up to you what you wanna keep.

Looks great otherwise!
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Re: The Official Pokémon Diamond, Pearl, and Platinum Project
« Reply #277 on: March 25, 2019, 12:07:55 AM »

115 - Battle! (Azelf/Mesprit/Uxie) - Zeila [Approved by Libera]

Did a bunch of edits on the sheet.  Generally they were geared towards layering and general layout, including bar distribution.  I also removed some octaves/shifted them around in places to avoid lots of collisions with the bass line.  Finally I reworked the right hand of the last section to make it more clearly follow the upper line.  Plus there were some voicing and accidental changes in a few places, but nothing major.  All of the notes looked great!
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