Metroid title theme-it's wrong

[Olimar12345]

i don't really like to complain, but something has to be done about this.
the origional metroid title theme's bass line gets off really bad from measure 18-41(no offense 2 whose it is)and theres a measure missing between 37 and 38! how this was overlooked and submitted is beyond me...
http://www.ninsheetmusic.net/sheetmusic.php?franchise=Metroid
i've been working on this for a while and this shows how it's supose to sound
http://www.mediafire.com/?mm051m4tg33
as a big metroid fan, i couldnt just let this go-something needs to be done about this

[pumpy_heart]

Dude...that just got uploaded.
No offense, but checking out submissions more might have prevented this.

[Olimar12345]

what really blows me away is the entire measure missing between 37 and 38! how do you overlook something that drastic?!?

[Palagerini]

the bass sounds perfectly fine to me... and i have the game for VC... i'm checking the missing measures now...

edit: ok i listened to your version and there's a couple things wroung with yours... first of all the base in the beginnig is real off.. it's suppose to be like a bell note... and the extra note in the chord really doesn't help much... the quarter note at the end and the 8th rest doens't fit at all... i don't much care for the 8va in the treble part... it doesn't sound bad or anything... base in the 2nd part sounds a little wierd... just for the first couple of measures... alright i'll admit... i do kinda like your treble switch after the 4 note up thing... and then at the end you'll know that it plays 8 times I.E. 4 times and a repeat... 2 times and that wierd hold at the end doesn't sound like teh actual song... u can submit it but to me there's not much difference except the few measures of 2 treble cleffs... oh and the 8th notes at measure 31 don't really fit in... it sounds like a quarter pickup instead of 2 8ths...

[Olimar12345]

i'm not talking about the beginning, and i wasn't really planning to submit this song anyway-its 17 through 42 i wanted to fix on yours. here, listen to this- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pp96K7733qw
at around 0:44 is what im talking about-if u listen closely, u should be able to make out 3 separate parts. theres the high quarter notes, the sustaning whole notes, and the moving part-which sounds weird on yours.

[Palagerini]

hm.... i think i'll just submit a revision of my own song... there's a part u didn't metion in the last part which in my song is just doubling the treble... i couldn't here the thing that u were talking about... treble,bass... and drums were all i heard... if u don't mind i'd rather do what u did and make the bass treble and then fix the ending with some of my own work..

P.S. how did u make those red notes? i have finale printmusic demo right now...

[Olimar12345]

to make diferent color notes, go to the bottom left-hand corner-u should see little boxed numbers 1234
1=black(regular)
2=red
3=green
4=blue-but no one ever needs a 4th one...

plus, ure free to use my title theme arrangement to help

[The-Real-Link]

to make diferent color notes, go to the bottom left-hand corner-u should see little boxed numbers 1234
1=black(regular)
2=red
3=green
4=blue-but no one ever needs a 4th one...

plus, ure free to use my title theme arrangement to help

Actually. A 4th layer is used a lot in orchestral scores and vocal scores. Not a lot in piano though. You occasionally see it in a fugue or something, but other than that, not a lot.