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Author Topic: Nine Lives' Arrangements - "Sunset Wilds" from Mario Kart: Super Circuit  (Read 1180 times)

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Re: Nine Lives' Arrangement of "Versus" from Wario's Woods
« Reply #15 on: December 18, 2018, 02:38:45 AM »

I have a few suggestions (I'm only trying to help you):

- my computer blocked the PDF download to "Versus", saying that it detected a virus. While this may not be true, have you considered switching to Dropbox?
- you should really include all past arrangements in your original post, so that we can go back and check ones made before your latest sheet
- listening to the MIDI, I can tell you have a lot of wrong notes (from memory of my own arrangement of this). If you can try to tackle the above, we can get that taken care of

Again, I'm only trying to help you. But please, these suggestions will make things so much easier for us.
There's the Dropbox links then. For the past arrangements, I'll put 'em back after this sheet's sorted out. I'd like to focus just on this one for now.
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Re: Nine Lives' Arrangement of "Versus" from Wario's Woods
« Reply #16 on: December 18, 2018, 04:21:01 AM »

Ok, before we go any further, listen to that bass line in the original again, and fix any mistakes you find in your sheet. There's too many for me to list.
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Re: Nine Lives' Arrangement of "Versus" from Wario's Woods
« Reply #17 on: December 18, 2018, 04:25:15 PM »

Ok, before we go any further, listen to that bass line in the original again, and fix any mistakes you find in your sheet. There's too many for me to list.
To be honest, I can only hear a couple of notes that were wrong and changed them. Other than that, I don't hear what you're hearin'. Is there a possibility that the reference in the YouTube is compressed in a way that it makes it come out wrong? I promise I listened to it along with making the sheet and I listened to the bass line on the slowest speed I could make it. Is it perhaps in a different key or something of that nature?
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Re: Nine Lives' Arrangement of "Versus" from Wario's Woods
« Reply #18 on: December 18, 2018, 04:52:11 PM »

Well, the most glaring error I can hear is the two LH eighth notes at the beginning of m. 1 - 8, which should be Cs, not Ds. If you use AudioStretch (Flash), you can raise the pitch of the song up an octave to hear the bass more clearly (I use it for that often).
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Re: Nine Lives' Arrangement of "Versus" from Wario's Woods
« Reply #19 on: December 18, 2018, 11:48:00 PM »

Well, the most glaring error I can hear is the two LH eighth notes at the beginning of m. 1 - 8, which should be Cs, not Ds. If you use AudioStretch (Flash), you can raise the pitch of the song up an octave to hear the bass more clearly (I use it for that often).
All right. I changed the Ds to Cs and changed the sheet with what I heard from listening to the pitch shift.
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Re: Nine Lives' Arrangement of "Ballad" from Tomodachi Life
« Reply #20 on: April 29, 2019, 02:21:00 PM »

If anyone has any suggestions for these pieces, just let me know. I wanted to bump this up on the list so I could possibly get some help on them. Any suggestions for any of them besides the one from Wario's Woods would be much appreciated. The reason for that one is because "Versus" has already been submitted. Thanks!
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