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Submission Archive / Re: [ARCADE] SoulCalibur II - "Hubris" by Renaud Bergeron
« on: January 03, 2021, 08:28:58 PM »- On beat 2.5 of m3, the A goes up to and back down from a C quickly, just like at the beginning of m1, if you want to include that. You may or may not also consider including a grace note on the second note of m4.
Added both.
- This is what I hear for the last beat of m28 RH:
- I hear something similar for the last beat of m29 RH, although I can't tell if it's the same notes or not (maybe an octave higher?) since it's hard to hear. However, I definitely hear two eighth notes there instead of a quarter note.
Good catch. Those measures are kind of a problem because of overlapping lines, but I tried something nonetheless.
- In m43 LH Layer 1, was the Bn on the last beat removed for playability? I feel like it might still be doable if you included it.
It’s playable , but I feel it makes the low D lose impact, so I cut it out to focus solely on lowest part.
- Something to consider: Without the percussion, I feel like the LH rhythms in m11-19 make the sheet sound like it's in 12/8 instead of 6/4 until you hit m20+. I'm not sure if it sounds different on piano when someone's playing it live, or if there's a good way to adjust the LH rhythms and/or add notes to put more emphasis on the quarter-note beats. What do you think?
My primary reason for writing this piece in 6/4 is the melody, but the right hand in general usually emphasizes quarter notes.
Thanks for going over it.