thanks
Couple of things I'm wondering:
- why
- At that speed, is that triplet at the end of m.8 necessary? It seems a bit odd compared to how ''''''straightforward'''''' the rhythm is in other places
m.28 - the first quarter note in the bass is looking a bit uncomfortable with the neighbouring quarter note in its personal space, could space it out a bit more evenly there.
- Sounds like you could add accents to some of the notes in the runs
Most of the chords and notes seem good just from a quick glance. The patterns make it easier, I suppose
Couple of things I'm wondering:
- why
- At that speed, is that triplet at the end of m.8 necessary? It seems a bit odd compared to how ''''''straightforward'''''' the rhythm is in other places
m.28 - the first quarter note in the bass is looking a bit uncomfortable with the neighbouring quarter note in its personal space, could space it out a bit more evenly there.
- Sounds like you could add accents to some of the notes in the runs
Most of the chords and notes seem good just from a quick glance. The patterns make it easier, I suppose