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Author Topic: [GBA] Banjo-Kazooie: Grunty's Revenge - "Breegull Beach" by Jack  (Read 384 times)

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Series: Banjo-Kazooie
Game: Banjo-Kazooie: Grunty's Revenge
Console: Game Boy Advance
Title: Breegull Beach
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Jack
« Last Edit: June 28, 2019, 10:58:19 PM by Jack »
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Re: [GBA] Banjo-Kazooie: Grunty's Revenge - "Breegull Beach" by Jack
« Reply #1 on: April 13, 2019, 12:33:24 AM »

Here's the song -
     
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Re: [GBA] Banjo-Kazooie: Grunty's Revenge - "Breegull Beach" by Jack
« Reply #2 on: April 23, 2019, 01:49:13 AM »

Hey I was just browsing around a bit and was going to take a quick look at this - but I noticed your other submission with feedback on it was deleted - https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?topic=10678.0

Was that your doing?
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Re: [GBA] Banjo-Kazooie: Grunty's Revenge - "Breegull Beach" by Jack
« Reply #3 on: April 25, 2019, 08:55:39 PM »

Yes, I decided I'd scrap that project for now, so I didn't want it cluttering up this page.  If that's no good, I apologize, but yes - I did it.
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Re: [GBA] Banjo-Kazooie: Grunty's Revenge - "Breegull Beach" by Jack
« Reply #4 on: April 30, 2019, 12:07:56 AM »

That's fine if you would like to shelf it for now, but please give some indication of doing so in the future! Deleting it silently can leave our updaters rather confused and feeling rather unwanted, as the feedback they're giving is seemingly ignored.
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Re: [GBA] Banjo-Kazooie: Grunty's Revenge - "Breegull Beach" by Jack
« Reply #5 on: May 05, 2019, 01:26:49 AM »

Anyway, aside from the above, this looks pretty solid, though I do have a few important things to suggest before we get into the nitty-gritty of checking notes and cleaning up the formatting:

- You have sharps written in a lot of places. These should mostly be flats - take a look at the harmony to make sense of what you wrote. For example, the first half of measure 14 is an A flat chord. Consult step 4 of this guide for details and feel free to ask if you're confused.
- Think about your staccatos and note lengths a bit. In most places it's fine but I would advise against using staccato'd dotted eighth notes. Consider replacing instances of those with an eighth followed by a sixteenth rest.
- Notes within each beat should be beamed together - for instance the last two left hand notes in measure 3.
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Re: [GBA] Banjo-Kazooie: Grunty's Revenge - "Breegull Beach" by Jack
« Reply #6 on: June 21, 2019, 01:11:52 AM »

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Re: [GBA] Banjo-Kazooie: Grunty's Revenge - "Breegull Beach" by Jack
« Reply #7 on: June 28, 2019, 11:02:15 PM »

Hi -
I know it's been a while, but I fixed the music up using your comments, but I've been using this time trying to clean up the formatting, but as much as I try, I can't "shmoosh" or "unshmoosh" the bars to make the score look nice in the Notepad Version of Finale.
I hope I haven't left anything out, and sorry for the delay.

- Jack
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Re: [GBA] Banjo-Kazooie: Grunty's Revenge - "Breegull Beach" by Jack
« Reply #8 on: July 01, 2019, 01:16:04 AM »

No worries, I started fixing the beaming/formatting stuff up for you. Here's a WIP file.

However, I noticed that the video you posted looks to be an unofficial "remastered" version of the original song. We need to be using the original track as reference. Is this the right video?

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Re: [GBA] Banjo-Kazooie: Grunty's Revenge - "Breegull Beach" by Jack
« Reply #9 on: July 02, 2019, 01:17:29 AM »

Video looks fine - thanks a bunch
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Re: [GBA] Banjo-Kazooie: Grunty's Revenge - "Breegull Beach" by Jack
« Reply #10 on: July 02, 2019, 06:16:52 PM »

Is there anything I have to do at the moment?
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Re: [GBA] Banjo-Kazooie: Grunty's Revenge - "Breegull Beach" by Jack
« Reply #11 on: July 03, 2019, 10:56:08 PM »

Nope! Just hang tight until we take a closer look at the file I provided.
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Re: [GBA] Banjo-Kazooie: Grunty's Revenge - "Breegull Beach" by Jack
« Reply #12 on: July 06, 2019, 03:54:36 PM »

Ooh - just found this out by accident and I'm glad I did. This tune and the whole soundtrack was composed by Jamie Hughes instead of Grant Kirkhope, which I listed on the score.
Will you still be using the files I provided? If so, I can change it easy enough.
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