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[SNES] Kirby Super Star - "Dynablade Overworld" (Replacement) by Yug Guy

Started by Zeta, May 02, 2020, 06:35:28 PM

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Zeta

Submission Information:

Series: Kirby
Game: Kirby Super Star
Console: Super Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Dynablade Overworld
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Yug Guy


Replacement Information:

Links to Existing Sheet: MUS | MIDI | PDF
Replacement Type: Challenge (new arranger)

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Yug_Guy


Latios212

Awesome, glad to have a replacement for this one!

Notes look right, although there are a handful of missing/misspelled tones:
- B's missing in the first chords in m. 3
- Db's in m. 3-4 should be C# (A7 chord)
- Gb in m. 5/6 should be F# (major ninth over the E bass)
- D missing in chord in m. 9
- I think F# would make sense in m. 10 (leading into Gn)
- C's missing in chords in m. 10
- Bb missing in first chord in m. 11

Cosmetic:
- Collapse the first chord in m. 4 into one layer
- Unbeam the eighths when you have them on beats 3.5-4 in m. 10/12/14.
- Two eighth rests in m. 14 should be a quarter rest
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Yug_Guy


Latios212

Cool, almost there:
- LH notes between beats 3.5-4 are still beamed together in 10/12/14
- Last thing I'm noticing is inconsistency between LH/RH beaming in m. 13/15. Be consistent and beam them together over that beat 4 rest, or alternatively disconnect any beams that extend over a beat 4 rest in measures 1/5/7/11/13/15.
My arrangements and YouTube channel!

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mastersuperfan

Since you're unbeaming all eighth note pairs from beat 3.5 to 4, I feel like you might as well just unbeam everything that spans across beats. That's my preference, anyway.

The only other suggestion I have would be to add a grace note to m17 RH beat 1 (either Cn or C#; I think I prefer C# a bit more but either works).
Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on February 11, 2016, 03:00:36 PMthere's also a huge difference in quality between 2000 songs and 2010 songs
Quote from: Latios212 on February 11, 2016, 03:29:24 PMThe difference between 2000 songs and 2010 songs is 10 songs.

Yug_Guy

Quote from: Latios212 on May 07, 2020, 03:06:34 PM- LH notes between beats 3.5-4 are still beamed together in 10/12/14
- Last thing I'm noticing is inconsistency between LH/RH beaming in m. 13/15. Be consistent and beam them together over that beat 4 rest, or alternatively disconnect any beams that extend over a beat 4 rest in measures 1/5/7/11/13/15.
My bad. I thought you were referring to the RH in your previous post.

Quote from: mastersuperfan on May 09, 2020, 12:02:20 AMThe only other suggestion I have would be to add a grace note to m17 RH beat 1 (either Cn or C#; I think I prefer C# a bit more but either works).
Done.

Latios212

Quote from: Yug_Guy on May 11, 2020, 04:36:35 PMMy bad. I thought you were referring to the RH in your previous post.
Done.
No worries! Yeah just be sure to be consistent.

Measure 1 still remains to have its beams broken; everything else looks good.
My arrangements and YouTube channel!

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Latios212

My arrangements and YouTube channel!

Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
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Bespinben

M.16 beat 4 is a G7b9 chord, so the G# would actually be spelled as Ab.
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Yug_Guy

Quote from: Bespinben on May 12, 2020, 05:31:00 PMM.16 beat 4 is a G7b9 chord, so the G# would actually be spelled as Ab.
It's always the little things, isn't it?

mastersuperfan

Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on February 11, 2016, 03:00:36 PMthere's also a huge difference in quality between 2000 songs and 2010 songs
Quote from: Latios212 on February 11, 2016, 03:29:24 PMThe difference between 2000 songs and 2010 songs is 10 songs.

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