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razer84's arrangements (5/2) (updated/changed song)
« on: April 19, 2008, 04:30:47 PM »
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[PS2] Metal Gear Solid 3 - 'Snake Eater' - razer84
[Wii] Super Smash Bros. Brawl- Bramble Blast - razer84

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[PS2] Metal Gear Solid 2 - Updated Main Theme - razer84
« Last Edit: May 05, 2008, 11:30:51 AM by razer84 »
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Re: razer84's arrangements
« Reply #1 on: April 19, 2008, 07:41:37 PM »
You won a refridgerator, as you're the only one who submitted his sheet right. =p
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Re: razer84's arrangements
« Reply #2 on: April 19, 2008, 09:50:39 PM »
Quote from: G-Han on April 19, 2008, 07:41:37 PM
You won a refridgerator, as you're the only one who submitted his sheet right. =p

yipee!

so when can i submit the non-Nintendo stuff?
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Re: razer84's arrangements
« Reply #3 on: April 19, 2008, 10:29:23 PM »
Can't really say.
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Re: razer84's arrangements
« Reply #4 on: April 21, 2008, 08:26:03 PM »
Quote from: G-Han on April 19, 2008, 10:29:23 PM
Can't really say.

Quote from: G-Han on April 21, 2008, 01:26:58 PM
Anyway, how does next week sound?

i take that as an answer...
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Re: razer84's arrangements (4/21)
« Reply #5 on: April 21, 2008, 08:44:51 PM »
Next week is not this week heh. =p So submit a Nintendo-sheet this week, and a Sony one next week.
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Re: razer84's arrangements (4/21)
« Reply #6 on: April 21, 2008, 09:08:03 PM »
Quote from: G-Han on April 21, 2008, 08:44:51 PM
Next week is not this week heh. =p So submit a Nintendo-sheet this week, and a Sony one next week.

i know, but if i submit it this week, it will most likely be added next week.
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Re: razer84's arrangements (4/21)
« Reply #7 on: April 21, 2008, 10:02:16 PM »
Uhm, yeah. xD
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Re: razer84's arrangements (4/23)
« Reply #8 on: April 25, 2008, 10:31:24 PM »
could you guys check out Bramble Blast and tell me what you think? i think either something is missing or out of place, but i'm not quite sure what exactly it is.
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Re: razer84's arrangements (4/23)
« Reply #9 on: April 26, 2008, 08:17:57 AM »
Hey bud, you needed a key sig.  fix'd: http://www.mediafire.com/?0nh4mxtt2wx

Now there are no sharps, flats, or naturals ;)

As for sound, i can't tell because my speakers are off, and i'm supposed to be in bed.
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Re: razer84's arrangements (4/23)
« Reply #10 on: April 26, 2008, 01:14:25 PM »
enigma binary code.

but i can fix that one myself. thanks.
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Re: razer84's arrangements (4/23)
« Reply #11 on: April 27, 2008, 02:29:20 PM »
Dude....Snake Eater justs sounds wrong.
Not a good rendering of it.
First off, it goes too fast. Secondly, it looks messy. Finally, it's missing some key parts. This is why it sounds so empty in a couple of places.
I started this about 2 weeks ago and here is what mine is. I think some comparisons can be made for the better. I havent finished this, but you can use this as an aid to improve your own.
http://www.mediafire.com/?izpzj1iynmz
Yeah. I never felt the main theme restated in your version, but it gets restated many times. That's why I like this song so much.
Anyways, I hope I dont sound like a snob or anything, but I think you can fix some stuff in leui of comparing our version.
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Re: razer84's arrangements (4/23)
« Reply #12 on: April 27, 2008, 02:49:07 PM »
yeah, i'm still real new in arranging stuff so any advise or criticism is totally welcome and appreciated.

EDIT: enigma binary file.
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Re: razer84's arrangements (4/23)
« Reply #13 on: April 27, 2008, 02:56:42 PM »
I'd love to hear the Snake Eater one, but it's a Enigma Binary file. Both of them are. Well, to me they are.
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Re: razer84's arrangements (4/23)
« Reply #14 on: April 27, 2008, 04:28:23 PM »
your bramble blast arrangement is fairly accurate... but it's basically just melody at this point, very little harmony, making it not really a very good piano arrangement at the moment (no offense to you)...

try and find something to add for bass/harmony, then it shouldn't sound as empty...
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