Quote from: XiaoMigros on April 03, 2024, 08:01:39 AMSorry, I think I meant 73-78 here, as the LH arpeggios stretch out a little. I'd be comfortable leaving this as is but I feel like there might be a more comfortable solution here...
See my suggestion in the attachment
I think just dropping the E2 on beat 2 is good enough, but I would pull it through consistently, starting at m175.
Lastly, hairpins: In m8 make sure it ends just before the barline, instead of directly inside. And in m20, there should be a slightly larger gap between them both, I would nudge the left end left a little.
Updated after some discussion on discord (thought I posted this reply)