Well, it doesn't look super pretty, but it is aligned.
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Show posts MenuQuote from: Static on September 06, 2020, 12:26:30 PM- Because this is in swing, offbeat 8th notes should be aligned with the 3rd note in triplets; m8 is not currently aligned properly.Not sure how to do this in Finale, but I do agree on the principle.
Quote from: Latios212 on August 23, 2020, 05:14:19 PMSecret of Mana - The Color of the Summer SkyFixed.
- In measures 8, 16, and 24 I would recommend restriking the C as part of the second layer instead of tying it over in the first layer. The contour of the lower layer is changed currently (dips down instead of up).
- Related, the all the parentheses on the F notes in m. 27-28 are confusing because it's unclear whether they should be played or not. I'd recommend being explicit and removing the parentheses on those notes (except for m. 27 beat 1) to indicate they should be re-struck.
- Raise the eighth rests in m. 21/15 a little bit.
- I would recommend spacing out the staves a bit more in m. 22/26 instead of shortening the stems. I think a better goal to aim for is consistent spacing between the symbols on the staff rather than spacing between that staves. Look at how a spacing of 1.2 makes the m. 26 system look squished but the m. 29 system look a little too open.
- The p at the beginning of m. 29 should be centered between the staves.
- There's a random E under the left hand G at the end of m. 32/36, that I think would be worth including.
This caught me off guard, I definitely hear the C as originally written in. But it sounds like all three notes are actually present...
Quote from: mastersuperfan on August 20, 2020, 05:52:57 PM- Regarding the composer info: I'm always an advocate for the Oxford comma.Normally, I advocate for the Oxford comma, but I don't think it's really necessary in this case.
Quote from: Static on August 20, 2020, 11:47:43 AM- This sounds more like F minor than C minor to me.I understand where you're coming from, but I'm just not feeling F minor. The song is somewhat tonally ambiguous, which doesn't help matters.
Quote from: Static on August 20, 2020, 11:47:43 AM- Grace note in m8 should have a slur.Done
Quote from: Static on August 20, 2020, 11:47:43 AMMach Rider - Main BGM 1I thought we generally used the US release date? Changed regardless.
- Copyright year should be 1985 since that was the original release date.
Quote from: Static on August 20, 2020, 11:47:43 AMMach Rider - Main BGM 1Well, it appears that the Wikipedia from a couple years ago lied to me. How rude.
- HAL Laboratory did not work on this game.
Quote from: Bespinben on August 14, 2020, 07:22:44 PMNotate the bass line with ledger lines instead of ottava. With keyboard music, the player will typically read the top note and then infer the octave doubling.Quote from: Libera on August 16, 2020, 11:23:25 AMI agree with this.
Quote from: Libera on August 16, 2020, 11:23:25 AM-url/copyright not aligned to bottom margin.Done.
-There's this string harmony that comes in over the top at the end that makes the harmony at bit more interesting (sounds like an Eb and Ab to me). You might be interested in including that, maybe as a higher up chord in the final bar? Might work nicely.
Quote from: Libera on July 29, 2020, 04:17:10 PMUrl is still not aligned to the bottom margin. After that I'll approve.Sorry, I forgot about that. Should be good now.
Quote from: Libera on July 28, 2020, 03:46:57 AMJust a small thing from me. I don't think the A on beat 2.5 in the right hand of bars 2 and 5 is actually there. The left hand is playing the exact same note anyway at that point in your sheet, so it doesn't really affect anything, but I don't think they're doubling up in the original so the sheet should probably reflect that. It would be less confusing to play also.Fair enough. Fixed.
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