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• Do you think this would be better written at double the tempo, with double durations?
• For the last half, I think it's better to have 2 notes in the LH instead of 2 notes in the RH, I find it slightly easier to play

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Thanks for your suggestions, I found them very helpful.

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Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Dragon Buster
Console: Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Game Over
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arrangers: Jacopo Tore & Federico Mariane

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dCdy4s8B3Po
5:18

I didn't specify to move the tempo marking higher  a bit too high now

The PDF file is also strangely long as well this time, not sure if a different page style was selected when doing a print to pdf, but there's way too much white space below the copyright now. Please make sure page size 8.5x11/Letter or A4 is selected.

One other small detail noticed in Finale page layout, just click the circled box in my attached image reference and drag it right so the dotted lines overlap and one line instead of two is visible.

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Not much for me to add, other than it's cool to see the Godzilla franchise getting repped.

The tempo mark is a bit far off to the left, if only slightly. Perhaps move it right a little to center it over the time signature.

The non legato direction, I understand what it's articulating, but I also don't understand why there needs to be staccatos in m14 and m16. The notes with staccatos honestly sound the same length, if not slightly longer held than all the other 8th notes. Thoughts?

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I agree with Libera that this would look better in 6/8 but the meter feels better for 12/8, so I guess fine to keep it that way.

For the last measure for both staffs, the second half of the bar could be grouped as dotted half rests.

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What about the barrings?

I'm sorry, I didn't see the screenshot you send me!
I think it is better the actual barring.
Music moving in 4 impulse per phrase

I mean like this:

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Did you consider changing the dynamic to mp or p rather than mf?  You didn't respond.  I think it would fit a lot better.

Ok we did it

Sorry for the wait! Looks good, just one thing. Measure 5 beat 2.5 should be a G instead of an E.

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^Friendly reminder for the above, please read the reply and feel free to ask any questions if you don't understand. But if the submissions continue to stay in this state where "Jacopo Tore" is listed on the sheet but uncredited in submissions, we'll need to start archiving some of the extra submissions soon.

Yes you can archive, I Will upload when i Ve not other submission thx

Sorry for the delay.

Hmm, I'm not really sure what my thought process was about the time signature, it looks fine to me now.

I would say about the left hand in bar 4, have you considered something like this?

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I think I was making the triplet comment in light of changing the time signature, so it doesn't really make much sense anymore.  Something like this sounds much more like what is going on.

Additional things:

-The composer should be Keiji Yamagishi.
-I do still think it would look better with twice as many bars, which would also avoid the awkward empty final half of the final bar.  I guess it isn't so important though.
-I think a lighter dynamic, like mp or p, would better reflect the tone of the piece.

OK except for the bars question (I didn't understand if I have to change the meter or change the note values) I changed everything.
I hope it's ok

Replacement is not only for the "old scores", and here Levi added several new tracks. He did not intentionally replace your sheet, he simply wanted to have the complete soundtrack on site which made a replacement necessary.

Not necessary, you can leave my score. Not delete It. Thanks for the respect you were talking about

That sheet was replaced, yes, but not everyone here was happy about that. I'm not an administrator but I know first hand how much time it takes to get a sheet through this process, and I know first hand how much time it takes to check the sheets as well. I don't doubt that you invest a lot of time in your sheets, we all do here, but there is nothing inherently disrespectful about replacing somebody else's sheet.

It Is ridicoulus to add some articulation and replace identically the sale score, there Is an admin Who told me some months ago that replacement was only for the old scores (because the quality you are talking), unfortunately appened so If everyone has their say, I have mine.