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Quote from: cashwarrior1 on April 17, 2025, 11:18:40 AMIt feels a little weird to see a singular eighth note with no rests before it in m35. Are you able to make cross-stave beams? If not, I can do it for that entire section.
Quote from: cashwarrior1 on April 17, 2025, 11:18:40 AMNo, I meant b3. It's also up an octave, its the lower harmony of the string part on b3-4. I'm hearing a C on b3 in the RH as well and an Ab below the F-C dyad (Did you forget to add this?) on b4I added the An to the RH b2. The chromatic rise to Cn on b3 doesn't work with pedal. There is an An b4 in the LH?
Quote from: cashwarrior1 on April 17, 2025, 11:18:40 AMThe arpeggio notes shouldn't be swapped around, that takes away from the original and interrupts the movement this moment is supposed to have. There isn't any melody here, its just chords building up tension to transition into the next section.I swapped them back. Personally I find the chromatic rising line and the arpeggio equally important. I moved the Gb down the octave as it is somewhat playable there.
Quote from: cashwarrior1 on April 17, 2025, 11:18:40 AMI noticed there's a lot of space at the top of each page, is that a setting you can adjust?It looks fine in NotePad, when it gets printed then there's extra margins. I don't think I can fix it in NotePad. This might be fine from Finale.
Quote from: cashwarrior1 on April 17, 2025, 11:18:40 AMAnd
- There are multiple spots like m6 where the ties clash with the dotted notes (check the whole sheet for those).
- m23 rh - Could you move the tie so its not going through the note on b4?
- m32 rh - The tie cuts into the notes here too.
Quote from: cashwarrior1 on April 17, 2025, 11:18:40 AMAre things I don't think I can do in NotePad
- m13 rh - That grace note feels a little far from the eighth note if you could bring it a little closer. The slur also could be adjusted so its not as close.
- m14 lh b3 - There's dotted quarter note with a dot inside a note, that should be moved and line up with the dot of the note below.
Quote from: cashwarrior1 on April 17, 2025, 11:18:40 AMFixed/improved
- The dotted half rest in m8 lh can be deleted. In the same measure, the rh trill can be centered over the dotted half note. Also, the decrescendo is a little too close to the barline and note stems.
- The 4th system is a little too close to the 3rd on the 1st page, that can be moved down a bit.
- m36 rh - There should be a half rest on b3 for the half note. The eighth rest in the upper layer should be the same as the rest of the measure.
Quote from: cashwarrior1 on April 17, 2025, 11:18:40 AMIs this wide enough? I shrunk the fourth system's height by 0.5sp, which lets Musescore create another system. I've redistributed the measures around with the extra system, primarily reduced the clustering in m51-53 as well.
- Some of the notes in the 5th system of the 2nd page are quite close to each other, so the entire system could be widened a little.
Quote from: cashwarrior1 on April 17, 2025, 11:18:40 AMI centered this vertically.
- m55 - Could you center the ritenuto so its more in the middle?
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