NinSheetMusic Forums

Other => Creativity Corner => Story Telling => Topic started by: E. Gadd Industries on February 24, 2016, 02:56:08 AM

Title: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on February 24, 2016, 02:56:08 AM

Well, the story has now begun! If you still want to join, you can, but it isn't likely that you'll be a main character, unless it fits into the story well. If you DO want to sign up, click the spoiler and give the information the questions prompt. This can either be posted here or PM'd to me. Questions? You know what to do.

 Info requirements and exemplar

A- What will your Pokémon be?? (Don't be a legendary/mythical unless you're wanting a one-time appearance for a battle or something, or mentioned in some prophecy. You don't have to be a starter, though)
B- Will you be a "main character"? (As in, would you like for me to keep you in the story for a long time, or just for a season or so?)
C- Will you be part of an exploration team, or what will be your role?
D- Will you be good, bad, or neutral?
E- If you are a member of an exploration team:
1. What will your team's name be?
2. Who all is in your team? (No more than 4, please)
3. What do you explore for (I. e., do you explore for a guild, a society, yourself, what?)
F- What will your Pokémon's (nick/)name be?
G- Level & Moveset (Don't be ridiculous, though. Start off reasonably)
H- Do you plan to evolve?
I- Home village
J-Were you a human? (I only want a few of these people)

If I'm missing anything else, please feel free to say something!

My info:
Turtwig
Name: Ricco
Level: 6
Moveset: Tackle, Leer, Razor Leaf
Role- Good, Exploration Team (name unknown yet, will be decided upon by team, and if you want to join, say so!)
I plan to be in the story all the way through.
I do plan to evolve at some point.
I wasn't a human, and my home village would be Serene Village.
I explore for the fun of it, although I may join the Expedition Society in the future.

[close]

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________

The story so far:
Prologue: The Way Things Used to Be (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OiluhnGDSb9RdI3DvYYxh-y3WINA7lmJ_DjKgbl6YWA/edit?usp=sharing>)
Chapter 1: Setting Out (https://docs.google.com/document/d/10T2tOHc27A1ipzQvlhQIKZXIOi9xdZ9Leiy0dr-08QM/edit?usp=sharing>)

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: Oronoco on February 24, 2016, 03:05:30 AM

This sounds super-cool, so I want to encourage you as much as possible. I'm still as passionate about home-made stories as I was in Middle and High School.

I'll give you some info about my character soon!

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: Latios212 on February 24, 2016, 03:13:10 AM

Post here or PM?

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on February 24, 2016, 03:19:47 AM

Quote from: Oronoco on February 24, 2016, 03:05:30 AM

This sounds super-cool, so I want to encourage you as much as possible. I'm still as passionate about home-made stories as I was in Middle and High School.

I'll give you some info about my character soon!

Thanks! :D

Quote from: Latios212 on February 24, 2016, 03:13:10 AM

Post here or PM?

Either one works.

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: braix on February 24, 2016, 03:29:30 AM

A- What will your Pokémon be?
A Fennekin

B- Will you be a "main character"?
Sure that'd be great

C- Will you be part of an exploration team, or what will be your role?
Anything is fine really, use your imagination :3

D- Will you be good, bad, or neutral?
Good

E- If you are a member of an exploration team:
1. What will your team's name be?
Braixen's Buddies
2. Who all is in your team?
Cool NSM people if thats possible. If that's not how it works, let me know
3. What do you explore for?
I just want to have fun and make some good friends.

F- What will your Pokémon's nickname be?
Braix

G- Level and Moveset
Lv.9. Making up the moveset later

H- Do you plan to evolve?
I don't know actually. Fennekin is pretty nice

I- Home village
I dunno, didn't finish the game yet so I don't know what the options are. Put me somewhere cool.

J- Were you a human?
No



I might fix some things up later in an edit when I have time

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: Oronoco on February 24, 2016, 03:47:40 AM

A- What will your Pokémon be?
Cubone

B- Will you be a "main character"?
Yes because that's fun.

C- Will you be part of an exploration team, or what will be your role?
Meh, probably not at first. But I'm willing to team up if our goals align. Do with me what you will.

D- Will you be good, bad, or neutral?
I want to be a good Pokémon. But it would be great if my goals/purpose oppose the other main characters'. 

F- What will your Pokémon's (nick/)name be?
Oronoco

G- Level & Moveset
I'll do Lv.6, too. But maybe know Bone Club already or else I can't do squat.

H- Do you plan to evolve?
Yup.

I- Home village

Quote from: braixen1264 on February 24, 2016, 03:29:30 AM

Put me somewhere cool.

J-Were you a human?
Sign me up. Humans are cool.

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: Dudeman on February 24, 2016, 03:55:12 AM

ladies and gentlemen welcome to the umpteenth nsm video-game-based collaboration story which may or may not die out soon

Uhh...I mean...GET HYPE!

A- What will your Pokémon be?
- Haunter. Easily.
B- Will you be a "main character"?
- As much as I'd love to be, my character would fit better as a side role. See below.
C- Will you be part of an exploration team, or what will be your role?
- I go it solo. My character is somewhat of a recluse who's shunned society because of trust/social issues. Just fightin' to survive and scare the occasional traveller.
D- Will you be good, bad, or neutral?
- Technically neutral, but I'm not a nice guy. You won't get any sympathy from me.
E- If you are a member of an exploration team:
- N/A, obviously. I do go exploring but only as a means of survival. Or for funsies. Ghosts are scary.
F- What will your Pokémon's (nick/)name be?
- Just "The Haunter" but real name is JOOOOOOOOHN CEEEEENAAAAAAAAAAAAA Hal.
G- Level & Moveset (Don't be ridiculous, though. Start off reasonably)
- 40-ish, I guess. You get strong from living on your own. Moves include Taunt and Will-O-Wisp and Shadow Ball.
H- Do you plan to evolve?
- Nah. There's already a significant Gengar in the franchise.
I- Home village
- I don't know the Mystery Dungeon universe well enough to say which, but fortunately I don't have to live there.
J-Were you a human? (I only want a few of these people)
- Nope. That much is certain.

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: BlackDragonSlayer on February 24, 2016, 04:29:53 AM

A- What will your Pokémon be?
Bisharp

B- Will you be a "main character"?
Recurring supporting character who shows up occasionally. Would mostly be referenced to, with his agents appearing in his stead (might appear in person a handful of times, or once or twice a season depending on how you're going to be doing this, but would usually only interact directly with the protagonists to give them advice).

C- Will you be part of an exploration team, or what will be your role?
Yes and no? Bisharp is a shadowy figure, almost like a mob boss, who, for the most part, uses loyal-but-bumbling Pawniard agents to do his bidding, rarely fighting himself. When he feels the need to fight, however, he never holds back. He would probably only join the protagonists' team at the tail end of the story, if at all (depends on the direction you want to go in). During the story, the protagonists probably wouldn't realize who he is until they do something that gets in his way, and he sends his agents to (try to) stop them (his first appearance might be friendly-but-enigmatic, for example, with his agents only showing up later). Imagine something like Meta Knight in Kirby's Adventure plus G0-T0 from KotOR 2.

As a Pawniard, Bisharp used to be a mischief-maker for other Pokemon, until one day, he learned a terrible secret. Since evolving, he has wisened up and focused all his efforts into training himself to the point of deadly efficiency.

D- Will you be good, bad, or neutral?
Neutral, overall. Even though Bisharp's actions might often impede the protagonists' goals (or even break laws at times), he ultimately has their best interest in mind- they just might not be able to see it at the time, and for whatever reason, he wishes to remain inscrutable.

E- If you are a member of an exploration team:
1. What will your team's name be?
Not really a team per-se, but his organization is known as The Initiative.
2. Who all is in your team?
Only Pawniard, except when he steps in (usually when he really means business or needs to get something done).
3. What do you explore for?
Nobody knows yet... but they might eventually...

F- What will your Pokémon's (nick/)name be?
Most people who know of his existence would call him either "Bisharp" or "Boss." His real name is Syver, although only he currently knows this.

G- Level & Moveset
Don't know about level, but his moveset is Knock Off, Iron Head, Swords Dance, and Guillotine. As I said, though, he rarely fights someone directly.

H- Do you plan to evolve?
Already evolved.

I- Home village
Unknown.

J-Were you a human? (I only want a few of these people)
No. However, he is aware of those who are.




If this won't work, let me know, and I'll do something more basic instead.

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: Nebbles on February 24, 2016, 06:44:16 AM

A- What will your Pokémon be?? Drifloon!
B- Will you be a "main character"? I'd like to be, if not, I can be a recurring one.
C- Will you be part of an exploration team, or what will be your role? Probs leading a ghost type exploration team.
D- Will you be good, bad, or neutral? Good.
E- If you are a member of an exploration team: Yeah, I lead one.
1. What will your team's name be? Either Team Umbra, or Team Spooky for a PMD-esque silly name.
2. Who all is in your team? Me, a Shuppet, and Misdreavus
3. What do you explore for (I. e., do you explore for a guild, a society, yourself, what?) Probs a guild of sorts. Maybe not Wigglytuff's, but we traveled to Treasure Town to become a part of it.
F- What will your Pokémon's (nick/)name be? Nebbles, duh
G- Level & Moveset (Don't be ridiculous, though. Start off reasonably) Probably around like, 10ish? Gust and Astonish?
H- Do you plan to evolve? Hmm, unsure.
I- Home village Treasure Town
J-Were you a human? (I only want a few of these people) Nah.

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: InsigTurtle on February 24, 2016, 07:21:00 AM

This sounds cool

A- What will your Pokémon be?? Quilava
B- Will you be a "main character"? If possible, yes. if not, side is okay. with some fries, I hope.
C- Will you be part of an exploration team, or what will be your role? i guess i'll be part of an exploration team at first. not sure about later, i might leave it. but my ultimate goal is to find out how things work and why things happen
D- Will you be good, bad, or neutral? good because i'm a good person
E- If you are a member of an exploration team:
1. What will your team's name be? no clue
2. Who all is in your team? (No more than 4, please) uhh, i'd go with a team of quilava + charmeleon + bayleef + servine
3. What do you explore for (I. e., do you explore for a guild, a society, yourself, what?) i fight for my friends. in all seriousness, i explore to better understand the world and what goes on
F- What will your Pokémon's (nick/)name be? no clue. maybe just go with insig
G- Level & Moveset Probably about 14-15. Dunno about the move set tho
H- Do you plan to evolve? naah bro quilava is like that angsty adolescent. i like that about 'im
I- Home village Noe Town
J-Were you a human? Possibly.

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: Zeila on February 24, 2016, 08:23:35 AM

A- What will your Pokémon be??
Piplup

B- Will you be a "main character"?
I'm fine with being a side character. How many main characters are there going to be?

C- Will you be part of an exploration team, or what will be your role?
Sure

D- Will you be good, bad, or neutral?
chaotic neutral

E- If you are a member of an exploration team:
1. What will your team's name be?
idk
2. Who all is in your team? (No more than 4, please)
I'm fine with partnering up with other NSM members, otherwise just use a randomizer
3. What do you explore for (I. e., do you explore for a guild, a society, yourself, what?)
Myself (or my team I guess). Mostly for the adventure

F- What will your Pokémon's (nick/)name be?
Zeila I guess

G- Level & Moveset (Don't be ridiculous, though. Start off reasonably)
Lv. 15
Moveset: Headbutt, Aerial Ace, Water Pulse, Protect

H- Do you plan to evolve?
nah

I- Home village
Capin Town

J-Were you a human? (I only want a few of these people)
No, but if hardly any people say yes then feel free to put me down as one. If I am one, then the main reason why I'm exploring could be to discover the new world (if humans come from a different land anyways)

bio: zeila was born with a special power. she was stronger than all her classmates in the pokemon fighting academy. she served in the pokemon military fighting ash's pikachu and in the final battel against pikachu they were fighting and pikachu turned her to the darkness and zeila turned against pikachu and killed him. she lost a part of her ear in the battle which is why she doesnt not have a part of her ear, pls dont PM me askin me why thats why.
likes: hurtin people, bein badass, motorcycles, nine inch nails (the band), killing, death, punk rock, jinco jeans, skulls, darkness, hot pokemans, ninne inch nails (on finger), earings, purple (cool kind)
dislikse: niceness, happiness, levis, ash katchum from pallet town, trent razner, short nails, sunshine, life, my dad, football

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: BrainyLucario on February 24, 2016, 02:47:56 PM

Quote from: E. Gadd Industries on February 24, 2016, 02:56:08 AM

A- What will your Pokémon be?? (Don't be a legendary/mythical unless you're wanting a one-time appearance for a battle or something, or mentioned in some prophecy. You don't have to be a starter, though)
B- Will you be a "main character"? (As in, would you like for me to keep you in the story for a long time, or just for a season or so?)
C- Will you be part of an exploration team, or what will be your role?
D- Will you be good, bad, or neutral?
E- If you are a member of an exploration team:
1. What will your team's name be?
2. Who all is in your team? (No more than 4, please)
3. What do you explore for (I. e., do you explore for a guild, a society, yourself, what?)
F- What will your Pokémon's (nick/)name be?
G- Level & Moveset (Don't be ridiculous, though. Start off reasonably)
H- Do you plan to evolve?
I- Home village
J-Were you a human? (I only want a few of these people)

If I'm missing anything else, please feel free to say something!
Once I get enough people to sign up (say....... 15-20?), I'll start drafting the first chapter.

A: Riolu
B: Main Character
C. Exploration team
D. Good
E. Team Rhythm (can change)/ would like to join your team of possible E. Gadd/ explore for self
F: Brainy
G: Start at level 10, Focus palm (fighting), Bite+3, Wide Slash, Aura Sphere
H: Yes
I: Treasure Town
J: Yes and has the Dimensional Scream ability.

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: mikey on February 24, 2016, 06:26:03 PM

A- What will your Pokémon be??
                    Marshtomp
B- Will you be a "main character"?
                    Don't care either way
C- Will you be part of an exploration team, or what will be your role?
                    actually naw going solo
D- Will you be good, bad, or neutral?
                    Black (everything I do is in self-interest)
E- If you are a member of an exploration team:

1. What will your team's name be?

2. Who all is in your team? (No more than 4, please)

3. What do you explore for (I. e., do you explore for a guild, a society, yourself, what?)

F- What will your Pokémon's (nick/)name be?
                   ⋥ ☯₝✔✕=♨
G- Level & Moveset (Don't be ridiculous, though. Start off reasonably)
                   Level 23: Water Pulse-Bulldoze-Protect-Mud Slap
H- Do you plan to evolve?
                   Sure
I- Home village
                   Unknown
J-Were you a human? (I only want a few of these people)
                   Nah

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on February 24, 2016, 06:37:36 PM

Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on February 24, 2016, 06:26:03 PM

1. What will your team's name be?
                   Team  ╣۩ △△ "-
F- What will your Pokémon's (nick/)name be?
                   ⋥ ☯₝✔✕=♨

I'm sorry, but I don't believe I study Emoji-ese.

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: Waddle Bro on February 24, 2016, 06:43:41 PM

dibs arceus

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: mikey on February 24, 2016, 07:34:47 PM

Quote from: E. Gadd Industries on February 24, 2016, 06:37:36 PM

I'm sorry, but I don't believe I study Emoji-ese.

then copy paste it because it's fun to try and imagine how you'd vocalize it

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on February 24, 2016, 09:30:46 PM

XD
"We are team dsnfgapr, and we're here to help!"
"Team...what...?"
"Dsnfgapr, why?"
"..."

Quote from: Waddle Bro on February 24, 2016, 06:43:41 PM

dibs arceus

I'm going to need a bit more info than that!  ;)

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: Waddle Bro on February 24, 2016, 10:25:23 PM

A- a like ARCEUS THE BASED GOD DANK JESUS HESEKIEL MOSES kneel down peasants
B- i'll be the main character pls that's it casting over glad to see u all see perhaps yall get your chance next season
C- i'll be playing the role of LORD

F- drizzy drake
G- only thunder wave and swagger are moves worthy of a god

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: davy on February 25, 2016, 01:25:43 AM

A- What will your Pokémon be??
Poliwag

B- Will you be a "main character"? (As in, would you like for me to keep you in the story for a long time, or just for a season or so?)
I would like Poliwag to be a "main character".

C- Will you be part of an exploration team, or what will be your role?
I would like to be part of an exploration team, preferebly joining another team of nsm members (possibly e.gadd's or braix'), preferably not as the leader. However, at some point in the story I would like to leave the team and become an antagonist.

D- Will you be good, bad, or neutral?
Initially good, bad later on.

E- If you are a member of an exploration team:
1. What will your team's name be?
I'll leave that up to another NSM member in the team.

2. Who all is in your team? (No more than 4, please)
Whoever else is in the team I end up in.

3. What do you explore for (I. e., do you explore for a guild, a society, yourself, what?)
Poliwag kinda chooses the most clear path because he is scared of making decisions himself (that will change though when he goes evil).

F- What will your Pokémon's (nick/)name be?
Glenn

G- Level & Moveset (Don't be ridiculous, though. Start off reasonably)
Level 5, Moveset: Water Sport, Water Gun

H- Do you plan to evolve?
Yes, both to poliwhirl and to poliwrath

I- Home village
Don't really know the mystery dungeon locations. I might look into it later. Otherwise, just put me wherever.

J-Were you a human? (I only want a few of these people)
Preferebly yes.

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: mikey on February 25, 2016, 01:30:09 AM

Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on February 24, 2016, 06:26:03 PM

A- What will your Pokémon be??
                    Marshtomp
B- Will you be a "main character"?
                    Don't care either way
C- Will you be part of an exploration team, or what will be your role?
                    actually naw going solo
D- Will you be good, bad, or neutral?
                    Black (everything I do is in self-interest)
E- If you are a member of an exploration team:

1. What will your team's name be?

2. Who all is in your team? (No more than 4, please)

3. What do you explore for (I. e., do you explore for a guild, a society, yourself, what?)

F- What will your Pokémon's (nick/)name be?
                   ⋥ ☯₝✔✕=♨
G- Level & Moveset (Don't be ridiculous, though. Start off reasonably)
                   Level 23: Water Pulse-Bulldoze-Protect-Mud Slap
H- Do you plan to evolve?
                   Sure
I- Home village
                   Unknown
J-Were you a human? (I only want a few of these people)
                   Nah

I edited it to reflect my black-ness

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on February 25, 2016, 02:26:21 AM

Davy and Brainy, both of you can be on my team.

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: BrainyLucario on February 25, 2016, 03:36:41 PM

Adding more character traits and details.

Quote from: BrainyLucario on February 24, 2016, 02:47:56 PM

A: Riolu   (Always carries a sun ribbon until he evolves.////Keeps a pair of headphones around his neck.)(My character would be one to rush into a situation without thinking of the effects it could have, My character also gets excited very easily, I'm also usually always bursting with energy, so My character hardly ever gets tired)
B: Main Character
C. Exploration team
D. Good
E. Don't really care what the name is. / E. Gadd (leader), me, and Davy (until he turns evil)/ explore for self
F: Brainy
G: Start at level 10, Focus palm (fighting), Bite (dark), Wide Slash (normal), Aura Sphere (Fighting)
H: Yes
I: Treasure Town
J: Yes and I have the Dimensional Scream ability. ( I see the future or past if I touch an object that correlates to the vision I see. Say I see someone getting attacked in my vision. I would have to come into contact with the attacker before I would get the vision. Does that make sense?)

So how many more people do we need for the first chapter to start?

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: braix on February 25, 2016, 04:05:45 PM

Brainy if you're always bursting with energy, how are you supposed to never get tired?

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: Hero of Trains on February 25, 2016, 04:22:50 PM

A- What will your Pokémon be?? (Don't be a legendary/mythical unless you're wanting a one-time appearance for a battle or something, or mentioned in some prophecy. You don't have to be a starter, though)
I want to be a Charmander!
B- Will you be a "main character"? (As in, would you like for me to keep you in the story for a long time, or just for a season or so?)
I'd love to be a main character, if possible.
C- Will you be part of an exploration team, or what will be your role?
I want to be the misguided bad guy, who's being deceived by the true baddie and then eventually learns the error of their ways, but only after they do something horrible. Think Brutus but instead of dying he decides to team up with Mark Antony.
D- Will you be good, bad, or neutral?
Bad at first, but then good.
E- If you are a member of an exploration team:
1. What will your team's name be?
2. Who all is in your team? (No more than 4, please)
3. What do you explore for (I. e., do you explore for a guild, a society, yourself, what?)
F- What will your Pokémon's (nick/)name be?
Trains, I guess.
G- Level & Moveset (Don't be ridiculous, though. Start off reasonably)
Level 7 at the start, but get stronger quickly. I follow the PMD2 moveset for Charmander, so Growl, Scratch and Ember.
H- Do you plan to evolve?
NO.
I- Home village
Treasure Town
J-Were you a human? (I only want a few of these people)
Nah

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: BrainyLucario on February 25, 2016, 04:58:08 PM

Quote from: braixen1264 on February 25, 2016, 04:05:45 PM

Brainy if you're always bursting with energy, how are you supposed to never get tired?

I'm full of enough energy to keep myself from being tired. The energy basically prevents me from getting tired..

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: Bespinben on February 25, 2016, 08:38:35 PM

A- What will your Pokémon be?? (Don't be a legendary/mythical unless you're wanting a one-time appearance for a battle or something, or mentioned in some prophecy. You don't have to be a starter, though)
None. My wavelength did not match any of the available Poké-avatars upon being interviewed by the Voices of Life, so I was allowed remain human, under the condition I never reveal my identity. As such, I sport a full-body cloak (deep viridian colored) while in public.

B- Will you be a "main character"? (As in, would you like for me to keep you in the story for a long time, or just for a season or so?)
I lurk behind the scenes, taking notes of the proceedings of the PMD world and analyzing its inner workings.

C- Will you be part of an exploration team, or what will be your role?
I have taken up a number of research topics, most notably in the realm of dungeon research and Magnagate manipulation. I maintain a column in Pokémon News (http://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Pok%C3%A9mon_News_(Mystery_Dungeon)), the Pelliper-circulated newpaper popular in the Wind Continent, in which I publish my latest findings under the pseudonym "The Seer". As a hobby, I am also in the process of compiling an anthology of local folk tunes from across the globe via aural transcription. Kricketune's choir in Lively Town would benefit greatly from this, I hope.

D- Will you be good, bad, or neutral?
An aloof party. However, since I maintain a regular correspondence with the presiding deities of the PMD world (notably Hydreigon) in order to collect information on the influx of human souls into the PMD universe and thereby study its effect on the world's balance, you could say I have the world's best interests at heart.

E- If you are a member of an exploration team:
N/A.

F- What will your Pokémon's (nick/)name be?
N/A.

G- Level & Moveset (Don't be ridiculous, though. Start off reasonably)
Since I'm at an obvious physical disadvantage, I stock up thoroughly on Wands and flat-rate damage projectiles, such as Gravelrocks and Blast Seeds. Following Undertale logic, I have 20 HP.

H- Do you plan to evolve?
N/A.

I- Home village
"The other side of the sky"

J-Were you a human? (I only want a few of these people)
Was. Am. Will be.

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: mikey on February 25, 2016, 09:09:34 PM

you spelled pelipper wrong

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on February 25, 2016, 11:13:38 PM

Bespinben, you just gave me the best intro idea I've thought of. Thanks!

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: mikey on February 25, 2016, 11:19:41 PM

ooh I get to know who bespinben is because I'm black

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: Yug_Guy on February 26, 2016, 12:02:02 AM

It's been a while since I last played a Mystery Dungeon game, so let me know if this is okay:
A) Monferno
B) Probs not. Recurring most likely
C) Owner and head chef of Café Caloroso; [HUB_TOWN]'s hottest restaurant and home of the world-famous Pecha Paella. CC is a place where many of the locals hang out, and is a good place to hear the latest gossip or receive the latest quests/missions (idk what they're called in-game)
D) Mostly neutral, though is willing to help out here or there via info, advice, etc.
E) N/A
F) Dante
G) Lv 18 ('cause you have to be at least 14 to be a Monferno), knows Scratch, Ember, and Brick Break. Though, stats aren't very high considering most of these moves are used for cooking and not fighting.
H) Nah.
I) Wherever you're setting the "hub town"
J) Nope.

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on February 26, 2016, 01:22:11 AM

We are currently at 15 participants (provided Waddle is serious)! Umm... Let's go with 5 more participants, and I'll start draft Chapter 1.

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: Waddle Bro on February 26, 2016, 01:28:14 AM

the dank lord never kids

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on February 29, 2016, 03:57:53 AM

Well, if no one else joins tonight or tomorrow, I'll start drafting the Prologue, and whoever doesn't sign up by then isn't going to be included in the Prologue, but I'll include them in the next part (if the plot would make sense like that). So to recap: March 1st is the cut-off for appearances in the Prologue (which I'll try to include everyone in). I'll have various outlines for each character to choose from, so be sure to check your inboxes on the 1st (or 2nd, depending on when I've thought of the possible plotlines your character could follow), and respond to them ASAP! Then, watch on here for the posting of the link to the Prologue. What do you guys think would be better: Google Docs or Office Word?

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: Zeila on February 29, 2016, 04:05:31 AM

I think Google Docs is fine unless you don't want people clicking the link as you're typing the next chapter (assuming you put them all together, or even type it on Google docs itself instead of copy and pasting onto it)

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: Oronoco on February 29, 2016, 04:07:01 AM

That's ambitious that you're trying to include everyone in the Prologue! I look forward to reading it. Any chance I have to become a Pokémon is exciting.

I like Word Documents better, but either would be fine.

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: braix on February 29, 2016, 05:59:11 AM

I don't have word.

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on February 29, 2016, 01:21:30 PM

So, both would be the best route, eh? (And Zeila, I don't exactly plan on making one MASSIVE story in a single document; I'm going to separate it by chapter so you can easily access whatever part you're at. Just to avoid annoyance)

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: Oronoco on February 29, 2016, 02:36:58 PM

You don't have to make a Word version. Everyone could access the Google Doc, and I can copy/paste into Word if I want.

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on February 29, 2016, 04:49:49 PM

Alright, Google Docs it is!

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: mikey on February 29, 2016, 06:18:21 PM

what's probably best is typing up the document on your computer then copy pasting it into google docs

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on March 01, 2016, 01:25:56 AM

Yeah, that's my plan

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: AwesomeYears on March 01, 2016, 12:03:04 PM

Hopefully I'm not too late m8.

A- What will your Pokémon be?? Bidoof ;)

B- Will you be a "main character"? (As in, would you like for me to keep you in the story for a long time, or just for a season or so?) I don't know, possibly, possibly not, I'd rather not be a main character, more side character but try to keep me in as long as you can plz.

C- Will you be part of an exploration team, or what will be your role? Plz put me in someone's exploration team. I am a "HM Slave". Yay.

D- Will you be good, bad, or neutral? Good.

F- What will your Pokémon's (nick/)name be? "HM Slave". But you can call him "Doof"

G- Level & Moveset (Don't be ridiculous, though. Start off reasonably) Level 8. Knows (Cut, Rock Smash, Surf and Dive) [Yes, I know only Bibarel can learn Surf and Dive but Bibarels aren't as cool]

H- Do you plan to evolve? Possibly.

I- Home village Somewhere in the wild, maybily the forest.

J-Were you a human? (I only want a few of these people) Nopey Dopey.

Doof was "befriended" by (insert team) after their other group member ran away for the better of himself. Doof was instantly turned into a HM Slave and was taught all them moves. Doof is though happy to be with them.

Pros.
-Has a helpful nature.
-Doesn't know what a "HM Slave" is.
-Is loyal to the group.
-Has good moves when there is an object (tree, rock) is the way or if there's a river.

Cons.
-Doesn't help cook dinner or clean up the dishes being the chubby bastard lil fella he is.
-Doesn't know much words anyway.
-Isn't loyal to the lord Arceus, thinks it's a load of bullocks.
-Has total crap fighting moves, couldn't fight if his life depended on it.

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on March 01, 2016, 06:20:49 PM

You're not too late! I will start drafting the prologue after school!

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: Latios212 on March 01, 2016, 10:35:03 PM

oh I'm kinda late but not that late

A - Latios...?

B - Sure, make me a main character.

C - I work with one other Pokémon. Preferably someone who's a human, but you choose. Secretly, separate from and guild/exploration society.

D - Has no one signed up to be the bad guy yet? I'll go for it! (But don't make me actually bad - make me have some ulterior motive for being secretive and doing shady things that will be revealed later - like Grovyle in Explorers.)

E - My team of two doesn't have our own name, but other Pokémon who have heard of us but never met us (because we're mysterious!!) can call us something/whatever you want.
- Secret. Relevant to the plot. You make it up, but make me look suspicious while doing things that actually help to keep the world running smoothly.

F - er... none that I can think of.

G - 40? Luster Purge, Fly, Recover, Dragon Pulse

H - No.

I - ...............unknown for now

J - Maybe.

Not sure if any of this makes sense, it's kinda rushed (I'm in class but wanted to get it in before you get the story all finalized). Feel free to message me about it.

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: BlackDragonSlayer on March 01, 2016, 10:41:54 PM

Quote from: Latios212 on March 01, 2016, 10:35:03 PM

make me look suspicious while doing things that actually help to keep the world running smoothly.

This town ain't big enough fer the two of us. :P Or maybe it is. I dunno.

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: mikey on March 02, 2016, 12:12:54 AM

I think Davy signed up to be the bad guy
And I could easily end up being the bad guy too

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: Hero of Trains on March 02, 2016, 05:17:00 AM

I'd want to start as a bad guy too, but then have character development happen maybe?

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on March 03, 2016, 02:40:22 PM

Oh, hey, I started the Prologue yesterday, so inclusion in the prologue is over concerning sign-ups.

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on March 06, 2016, 02:31:15 PM

The Prologue is long. I mean, I was expecting that, but I wasn't expecting THIS. So, I'm splitting up the Prologue into two halves. Prologue P1 & P2. P1 should be out later today. I just have to edit and format everything (when I write, I write one massive paragraph, and that isn't proper conventioning).

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: BrainyLucario on March 06, 2016, 09:00:37 PM

AWWW YEAAHH!!! HYPE TRAIN! CHOO CHOO!

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on March 08, 2016, 03:02:28 AM

Check it out! Part 1 of the Prologue is UP!
(I'll edit into the OP tomorrow)
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OiluhnGDSb9RdI3DvYYxh-y3WINA7lmJ_DjKgbl6YWA/edit?usp=sharing

EDIT: Crap, I forgot to reformat and such. Something else I'll do tomorrow. XD

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: mikey on March 08, 2016, 03:39:18 AM

I lost it when I read "Braix, a Fennekin"

that was short you didn't have to split em up

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: BlackDragonSlayer on March 08, 2016, 04:22:50 AM

Hmmm... I like it so far!

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: AwesomeYears on March 08, 2016, 05:36:32 AM

I'm pretty impressed, can't wait for the next chapter!

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Sign-Ups!!
Post by: BrainyLucario on March 08, 2016, 02:51:33 PM

Nice! I can't wait for the next part!

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Prologue Part 1 is UP!
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on March 08, 2016, 04:37:53 PM

Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on March 08, 2016, 03:39:18 AM

that was short you didn't have to split em up

Really? Hmmm... Well, I'll combine both parts once I finish Part 2.

Anyhoo, it's great that everyone is enjoying the story so far! Any suggestions as to what I could do better?

EDIT: Also, the OP has been updated.

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Prologue Part 1 is UP!
Post by: braix on March 08, 2016, 04:59:22 PM

I liek

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Prologue Part 1 is UP!
Post by: Oronoco on March 08, 2016, 05:15:04 PM

It's great!

Quote from: E. Gadd Industries on March 08, 2016, 04:37:53 PM

Really? Hmmm... Well, I'll combine both parts once I finish Part 2.

You could definitely do this.

Just in case because it's a story

If you're the type who loves to go back and edit things a billion times (like me), it'd be nice to hear more about Trains, Braix, and Nebbles during the scene at school. They kind of "disappear" into the group, so it'd be nice to give them a few actions and little thoughts here and there.

I'm hyped to meet Arceus.

[close]

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Prologue Part 1 is UP!
Post by: mikey on March 08, 2016, 07:54:46 PM

oh yeah that's a good point.  I forgot they were protagonists during that part

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Prologue Part 1 is UP!
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on March 09, 2016, 02:37:10 AM

Arceus will probably the favorite character, just saying. XD I have plans for that plot! Also, hmmmm.... You guys are right, I probably should mention them more. Alright. Once I fix up Delfino Airstrip, I'll jump to that (along with a few minor errors and touch-ups)

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Prologue Part 1 is UP!
Post by: mikey on March 09, 2016, 03:08:48 AM

Arceus didn't really strike me as a deity any more than other legends did

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Prologue Part 1 is UP!
Post by: Oronoco on March 09, 2016, 03:41:18 AM

I also love Trains' introduction.

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Prologue Part 1 is UP!
Post by: braix on March 09, 2016, 03:45:28 AM

“Battle shmattle. What do you think PE class is for?” Braix retorted.
I absolutely love this line it's perfect

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Prologue Part 1 is UP!
Post by: Hero of Trains on March 09, 2016, 04:19:28 AM

Yay! It's great! One tiny quibble, looks cannot be sarcastic. Pet peeve that I must point out, my apologies. But it seems to be shaping up into a great story (with awesome main characters, if I do say so myself).

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Prologue Part 1 is UP!
Post by: mikey on March 09, 2016, 04:29:30 AM

and pet peeve can't be one word
although when someone gives a sarcastic look you know full well the face they make

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Prologue Part 1 is UP!
Post by: Hero of Trains on March 09, 2016, 04:33:34 AM

Yes, autocorrect is evil, editing now.
I know the face, I make it often. I think it is fine to say that in colloquial speech, but I prefer to point it out in actual writing (although this is also fanfiction posted on an Internet forum, so...)

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Prologue Part 1 is UP!
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on March 09, 2016, 03:12:16 PM

XD Well, what's an alternative that I could use that would provoke the same mental image?

Quote from: braixen1264 on March 09, 2016, 03:45:28 AM

“Battle shmattle. What do you think PE class is for?” Braix retorted.
I absolutely love this line it's perfect

It's nice to know some of the quotes are memorable! ;)
I haven't fully finished reformatting and editing, but I do plan to...plan...the other half of the prologue at the moment. (I can't fix anything because I'm at school and can't log on to my Gmail account)

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Prologue Part 1 is UP!
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on March 14, 2016, 12:16:11 AM

Part 1 is fixed and is ready to be Czech-ed out! If you have other suggestions or have anything specific that I need to include in Part 2, you know what to do!

Also, is Mike J anyone on here? I got an email from them requesting edit access so they could "do spellcheck and junk for me if I want". Seems dubious to me, but I've been surprised before. Once.

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Prologue Part 1 is UP!
Post by: Latios212 on March 14, 2016, 12:52:56 AM

Quote from: E. Gadd Industries on March 14, 2016, 12:16:11 AM

Mike J

sounds like nocturne (can't say if it is for sure)

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Prologue Part 1 is UP!
Post by: braix on March 14, 2016, 01:17:18 AM

yeah thats nocturneofshadow

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Prologue Part 1 is UP!
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on March 14, 2016, 02:42:07 AM

OH! Ok, thanks for letting me know!

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Prologue Part 1 is UP!
Post by: mikey on March 14, 2016, 08:21:28 PM

obvs me who else would it be

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Prologue Part 1 is UP!
Post by: Latios212 on March 14, 2016, 08:40:00 PM

Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on March 14, 2016, 08:21:28 PM

obvs me who else would it be

Michael Jackson.

or maybe Michael Jordan

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Prologue Part 1 is UP!
Post by: mikey on March 14, 2016, 09:42:42 PM

In my Democratic Citizenship class last year the guy next to me did a double take when the signature sheet went around.  He was like, "wait, is your name Michael Jordan?"  Unfortunately my signature is just messy.
#shortanecdotes

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Prologue Part 1 is UP!
Post by: BrainyLucario on March 22, 2016, 08:14:03 PM

How's the story coming along.

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Prologue Part 1 is UP!
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on March 22, 2016, 08:21:03 PM

I have been working on it, but homework takes precedence over it. Once I reach the weekend, progress will be accelerated exponentially. ESPECIALLY considering the fact that I have to binge-watch a playthrough before then so that nothing is spoiled for me in a certain someone's story.

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Prologue Part 1 is UP!
Post by: BrainyLucario on March 22, 2016, 08:23:56 PM

Quote from: E. Gadd Industries on March 22, 2016, 08:21:03 PM

I have been working on it, but homework takes precedence over it. Once I reach the weekend, progress will be accelerated exponentially. ESPECIALLY considering the fact that I have to binge-watch a playthrough before then so that nothing is spoiled for me in a certain someone's story.

oh yeah.........Sorry about that....I can't delay my story any longer, but you are almost done with the Undertale Pacifist playthrough.. so yay! just 2 more hour long video's and 1 more hour and 46 minute long video!

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Prologue Part 1 is UP!
Post by: mikey on March 22, 2016, 08:24:46 PM

why are you harming your friend in this way

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Prologue Part 1 is UP!
Post by: braix on March 22, 2016, 08:54:43 PM

E.Gadd you should play Genocide, it's more fun

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Prologue Part 1 is UP!
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on March 23, 2016, 02:12:21 AM

Well, once I finish watching Pacifist, I'll start watching the Geno playthrough.

Also, for those who are wanting a time projection to be up, be looking for sometime around Sunday (may change, though, depending on if things calm down or not)

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Prologue Part 1 is UP!
Post by: mikey on March 30, 2016, 07:22:27 PM

for reference- because I'm black aligned doesn't necessarily make me evil.  I'm totally willing to help as long as it's a gain for me.  I'm just not going to help you out from the goodwill of my heart.  This doesn't make me a mean person either; I just don't really care about you that much.

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Prologue Part 1 is UP!
Post by: BrainyLucario on March 30, 2016, 07:26:49 PM

Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on March 30, 2016, 07:22:27 PM

for reference- because I'm black aligned doesn't necessarily make me evil.  I'm totally willing to help as long as it's a gain for me.  I'm just not going to help you out from the goodwill of my heart.  This doesn't make me a mean person either; I just don't really care about you that much.

He's a gangsta!

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Prologue Part 1 is UP!
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on March 31, 2016, 02:52:49 AM

XD Noted!

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Prologue Part 1 is UP!
Post by: Oronoco on March 31, 2016, 03:40:27 AM

Quote from: E. Gadd Industries on March 22, 2016, 08:21:03 PM

I have been working on it, but homework takes precedence over it.

My word such willpower!
If you'd share some I'd sure appreciate it.

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Prologue Part 1 is UP!
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on April 04, 2016, 03:25:29 AM

Hey, I'd love to! XD it gets annoying sometimes!

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Prologue Part 1 is UP!
Post by: Ōkami~MD on April 28, 2016, 05:53:59 PM

soooo ummmmm not meaning to be disrespectful or anything but how's the story going?

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Prologue Part 1 is UP!
Post by: mikey on April 28, 2016, 06:46:46 PM

it's not.  He hasn't worked on it for over 2 weeks

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Prologue Part 1 is UP!
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on April 28, 2016, 07:51:52 PM

All of my Google Docs efforts have been channeled into my lab report; I have EOCs in 2 classes, one on May 4th, the other on May 5th. I should have PLENTY of free time in those two classes to work on this story.
:/ I hate school. A lot.

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: Prologue Part 1 is UP!
Post by: Ōkami~MD on April 28, 2016, 08:14:46 PM

well good luck with all that! hope you get through without dying

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: THE PROLOGUE IS COMPLETE!!
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on May 05, 2016, 06:29:32 PM

:D BREAKING NEWS!

The Prologue is complete!!

Thank you for your patience!
Now, you may know this or not, but that link in the OP was active the entire time! Give it a read! Tell me if anything needs to be fixed! (Some paragraphs aren't indented, but that'll be fixed once I get to my PC. Sorry for you OCD peoples out there :P ) Oh, and enjoy! If you have anything specific you want me to include in Chapter 1, you know what to do!

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: THE PROLOGUE IS COMPLETE!!
Post by: braix on May 05, 2016, 08:44:32 PM

I enjoyed that thoroughly
in ch.1 you should have a kungfu fight scene in which i karate chop nebbles ;^)

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: THE PROLOGUE IS COMPLETE!!
Post by: Dudeman on May 05, 2016, 09:26:00 PM

#BestTroll2016

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: THE PROLOGUE IS COMPLETE!!
Post by: BrainyLucario on May 06, 2016, 01:46:24 AM

Quote from: E. Gadd Industries on May 05, 2016, 06:29:32 PM

:D BREAKING NEWS!

The Prologue is complete!!

Thank you for your patience!
Now, you may know this or not, but that link in the OP was active the entire time! Give it a read! Tell me if anything needs to be fixed! (Some paragraphs aren't indented, but that'll be fixed once I get to my PC. Sorry for you OCD peoples out there :P ) Oh, and enjoy! If you have anything specific you want me to include in Chapter 1, you know what to do!

In chapter 1, you should make brainy do that thing we discussed as a Joke yesterday. Remember, the Bug...cliff....mud puddle....thing?

You know

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: THE PROLOGUE IS COMPLETE!!
Post by: mikey on May 06, 2016, 01:51:02 AM

if I could punch a guy that'd be great

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: THE PROLOGUE IS COMPLETE!!
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on May 06, 2016, 03:36:29 AM

Brainy: And that could be cause by Noc punching you! :D

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: THE PROLOGUE IS COMPLETE!!
Post by: mikey on May 06, 2016, 05:23:22 AM

yeah I could see myself punching a riolu
never particularly liked em

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: THE PROLOGUE IS COMPLETE!!
Post by: BrainyLucario on May 06, 2016, 03:16:20 PM

Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on May 06, 2016, 05:23:22 AM

yeah I could see myself punching a riolu
never particularly liked em

Make it happen.

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: THE PROLOGUE IS COMPLETE!!
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on May 06, 2016, 06:20:07 PM

Alright. Now just to fit it in the plot...

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: THE PROLOGUE IS COMPLETE!!
Post by: Hero of Trains on May 07, 2016, 02:55:23 AM

That was really good! I have to say, I actually like Braix more than me... but she's my friend, so that would probably happen anyway in the story! I can't wait to see more about all of the other characters.

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: THE PROLOGUE IS COMPLETE!!
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on May 07, 2016, 03:50:23 AM

Thank you! One thing is certain, I won't have every character in every chapter. That would be WAY too difficult. I'll instead have different stories & such & perhaps tie it all up in a nice, colorful bow. Thing is, when you read this story, you'll need to think when you read it. I like to slide little details/references in at points in my stories & I like to see who notices them & who doesn't. I'm actually starting on planning for Chapter 1 right now.

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: THE PROLOGUE IS COMPLETE!!
Post by: Ōkami~MD on May 07, 2016, 06:41:26 PM

Quote from: Hero of Trains on May 07, 2016, 02:55:23 AM

That was really good! I have to say, I actually like Braix more than me... but she's my friend, so that would probably happen anyway in the story! I can't wait to see more about all of the other characters.

i always think my friends r better than me lol

they ave better surnames as well

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: THE PROLOGUE IS COMPLETE!!
Post by: Oronoco on May 28, 2016, 05:27:52 AM

So sorry I'm late to the party, but I really enjoyed it! I'm excited to see everyone develop as the story goes on. And way to go for fitting everyone in there.

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! New: THE PROLOGUE IS COMPLETE!!
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on May 31, 2016, 02:57:31 PM

Thank you! Chapter 1 is being worked on, and progress is quite nice! (If only I could catch a break from chores)

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on July 02, 2016, 12:52:19 AM

Hey hey hey! Guess what!

What?

CHAPTER 1 IS COMPLETE!!!

[close]

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!
Post by: Hero of Trains on July 08, 2016, 05:17:26 AM

Wonderful once again! I really like both the characterization and the new characters you added. As for that mysterious Pokemon, I looked up Pokemon that can use hyper beam, and the only ones that are big and have both wings and legs are Dragonite, Salamence, and Charizard. I don't think it's Charizard because you would probably use a fire type move, so it's either Dragonite or Salamence. Again, awesome job, I really enjoyed it.

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!
Post by: Oronoco on July 08, 2016, 12:33:24 PM

Yes! You gotta keep writing!

You make me really want to enter a mystery dungeon called Withering Marketplace (with GtI graphics, please). It would just be so cool.

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on July 08, 2016, 05:17:11 PM

Quote from: Hero of Trains on July 08, 2016, 05:17:26 AM

Wonderful once again! I really like both the characterization and the new characters you added. As for that mysterious Pokemon, I looked up Pokemon that can use hyper beam, and the only ones that are big and have both wings and legs are Dragonite, Salamence, and Charizard. I don't think it's Charizard because you would probably use a fire type move, so it's either Dragonite or Salamence. Again, awesome job, I really enjoyed it.

Who said anything about wings, though? ;)

Quote from: Oronoco on July 08, 2016, 12:33:24 PM

Yes! You gotta keep writing!

You make me really want to enter a mystery dungeon called Withering Marketplace (with GtI graphics, please). It would just be so cool.

:O that actually sounds really cool! You might have something there!

Anyhoo, thank you both! I'll be starting Chapter 2 either today or tomorrow. (I took a little break from both music and writing for a day or so, but it's over now!)

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!
Post by: Hero of Trains on July 09, 2016, 05:21:26 AM

Well, it did say "the creature paused mid-flight". I guess there are some flying Pokemon that don't have wings, like Rayquaza, but Rayquaza doesn't have legs.
I appreciate your hard work, we all do, but make sure to pace yourself, too. We don't want you to get overwhelmed!

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on July 09, 2016, 12:47:09 PM

I'm trying to. XD thank you, though

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!
Post by: BrainyLucario on July 10, 2016, 09:13:11 PM

Great Job, E. Gadd!! You're a pretty good writer.

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!
Post by: mikey on July 10, 2016, 11:44:27 PM

uh yeah good job
just please remember to use 2 spaces after punctuation

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!
Post by: Dudeman on July 10, 2016, 11:47:38 PM

Uh, what? Why's that a thing?

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!
Post by: Hero of Trains on July 11, 2016, 04:28:29 AM

It technically is, but is becoming less common. A lot of style guides still recommend it, though. Also, it's only for periods.

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on August 28, 2016, 03:19:00 AM

Hey, all! So progress has been more than slow since school started. I will try to work on the story some at least once every day at school (maybe during lunch? I haven't quite ironed out all the details). So, this is just a reminder that this hasn't been abandoned, just immensely slowed.

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!
Post by: Oronoco on August 28, 2016, 03:49:52 AM

Good to hear! I've really enjoyed reading it, so I hope you keep enjoying writing it.

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on August 28, 2016, 01:11:56 PM

Oh, I love writing things like this! School has just been a sea of homework lately, and I haven't found a good time to do anything, including arranging. I am beginning to figure out different times I can do things, though.

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!
Post by: K-NiGhT on September 20, 2016, 05:10:48 AM

is this still going on? I'd love to try and join in if possible

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!
Post by: mikey on September 20, 2016, 05:27:16 AM

Yes it is.  Follow the guidelines in the op and e gadd will happily add you to the story

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on September 20, 2016, 05:42:31 PM

Quote from: K-NiGhT on September 20, 2016, 05:10:48 AM

is this still going on? I'd love to try and join in if possible

Yea, you can send your character info via PM or here.

(Thanks, Noc!)

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on October 02, 2016, 03:36:56 AM

Quote from: Oronoco on July 08, 2016, 12:33:24 PM

You make me really want to enter a mystery dungeon called Withering Marketplace (with GtI graphics, please). It would just be so cool.

I was thinking about this: would someone be interested in composing music for a mystery dungeon by this name/description given? If not, I may end up doing it at some point; I need to work on my composing skills.

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!
Post by: braix on October 02, 2016, 07:13:37 AM

I could try, but it'd be a first

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on October 02, 2016, 12:30:04 PM

I'm just interested in hearing how a piece would sound that came directly from the story. Give it a whole other perspective into the story, y'know?

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!
Post by: SlowPokemon on October 02, 2016, 04:47:32 PM

Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on July 10, 2016, 11:44:27 PM

uh yeah good job
just please remember to use 2 spaces after punctuation

This is months old now and may have been a joke, but that's actually incorrect; you only use one space after punctuation.

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!
Post by: mikey on October 02, 2016, 05:10:00 PM

since when

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!
Post by: SlowPokemon on October 02, 2016, 05:31:47 PM

Since always, though it's a pretty common misconception. My dad does the same thing. I don't know why some people do it.

Edit: after research, it seems that "two spaces following a period" was often taught on old typewriters, which might explain why it's mainly older people who have this rule in their heads.

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!
Post by: mikey on October 02, 2016, 05:38:28 PM

it's what I was taught all through school as well

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!
Post by: K-NiGhT on October 02, 2016, 06:06:27 PM

how's that Minnesota education working out for you

you guys also apparently call it "Duck, Duck, Gray Duck" so I don't blame you lmao

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!
Post by: mikey on October 02, 2016, 06:35:11 PM

Minnesota's education is one of the best in the US

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on October 02, 2016, 07:22:27 PM

I heard Iowa's is the best ::)

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!
Post by: mikey on October 02, 2016, 07:30:12 PM

Minnesota #10- https://wallethub.com/edu/states-with-the-best-schools/5335/
Minnesota #9- http://www.msn.com/en-us/money/realestate/states-with-the-best-and-worst-schools/ar-CCijIy#image=CCicEX|9

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!
Post by: K-NiGhT on October 02, 2016, 07:52:19 PM

is only joke

y u heff to b mad

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!
Post by: mikey on October 02, 2016, 07:54:17 PM

minnesota is better at hockey too

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!
Post by: SlowPokemon on October 02, 2016, 10:25:23 PM

Not only that, they also teach typing incorrectly

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!
Post by: mikey on September 07, 2017, 12:34:06 AM

Bump for arranger everyone to pressure e gadd into writing more

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!
Post by: BrainyLucario on September 07, 2017, 02:53:44 AM

Plz

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!
Post by: braix on September 07, 2017, 03:10:22 AM

E.Gadd I swear
send me your homework i'll do like all of it if it means that gives you time to work on the story

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!
Post by: SlowPokemon on September 07, 2017, 03:16:11 AM

I laughed out loud reading that last page of digressions about the typing

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on October 02, 2017, 04:35:27 AM

I need to know: who’s still here as a character? Because I don’t want a bunch of round characters that don’t represent anyone still here & if at all possible, try to steer the story away from those users

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!
Post by: Dudeman on October 02, 2017, 04:39:17 AM

Haunterello!

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!
Post by: BlackDragonSlayer on October 02, 2017, 05:17:30 AM

woot woot

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!
Post by: InsigTurtle on October 02, 2017, 08:46:40 AM

hi

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!
Post by: BrainyLucario on October 02, 2017, 01:25:41 PM

oi

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!
Post by: davy on October 02, 2017, 03:56:15 PM

me

Title: Re: The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on June 26, 2018, 06:46:31 AM

Heh... looks like this has been dead for a while... so listen, Braix poked me about it, and I agree, this needs to continue because the story has a lot of potential. But currently, my summer is slammed with trying to arrange the Sunshine OST & a few other things. After thinking on it, I thought, why not move this to my YouTube channel? In a sense, I would verbally tell the story (complete with voices for each character) instead of writing it out; I feel I could advance the story a lot more quickly in this manner. Would anyone be opposed to this? If not the whole community wants me to bury the idea because it’s so bad (wow such grammaring), then we’re looking at a revival and continuation of this story around September.

EDIT: I thought it would be a good idea to invite some people from Daj's Discord server (since many of them are PMD fans), and after discussing with Daj, we thought it would be a cool idea to make a roleplay server where you become your character! With so many people as characters, it'll be hard for me to keep up otherwise and generate a decent plot, so the roleplay will help me fill in details as I tell the story! Here's the link: https://discord.gg/5V7f9JM Bear in mind that only people that are in this server will be part of the story! (Unless you have a really good reason otherwise)