dont try to work with finale notepad, worst mistake of my life
OK, more feedback from me.
-The pickup is still erroneously included in the bar numberings and so everything is off by one.
-I don't think you need to specify that repeats should be played on the D.S. since this isn't classical music.
-There are a bunch of systems where the staff separation is much wider and pretty much the only one I think is necessary is the third system of the first page. All of the others ones should just be normal width.
dunno if i can fix any of these because NotePad Moment:tm:
-I think the left hand of bar 40 should be an octave higher. It is currently very low and muddy and doesn't really sound like the original there.
-I don't hear anything on beat 1 of bar 44.
-Bar 50-52's left hand sounds like it should be an octave lower.
-I agree with Static about the bass in bars 24/28 etc.
-I feel like the left hand pattern in bar 17-20 would be a lot easier to play if it was every third note that was up the octave, rather than every second. At the moment this is very awkward to play at tempo and I don't think changing it would affect the sound that much.
-Is the extra piano part left out of bars 46-48/50-52 for simplicity? I think it's a bit confusing having it be there in bars 45/49 and then suddenly disappear, so it might be a more consistent to just not have it all.
fixed these
-I hear something completely different in the bass in the second half of bar 18 and all of bar 20.
-I think it'd be cool if the left hand pattern changed for the first run through 29-36, where the percussion drops out in the original. It would be a nice source of variation in the arrangement and would reflect the original better I think.
could you clarify on these a tiny bit please? small brain doesnt fully understand this (i relistened and for some reason my brain blanked on what an alternative could be, apologies)
i think that's everything