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Submission Center / Re: Food/Cooking Update
« on: Today at 02:51:37 PM »
With that, Static's Funny Funny has been accepted

Submission Center / Re: Food/Cooking Update
« on: February 21, 2020, 11:30:12 PM »
Static's K.K. Salsa and Start+Coffee Break have been accepted

Yug Guy's Peanut Plain has been accepted

Submission Center / Re: Food/Cooking Update
« on: February 20, 2020, 03:03:15 AM »
Levi's eat the meat has been accepted. I listened to the FF6 victory theme while checking for formatting because holy crap this song is annoying to listen to for any length of time.

Funny Funny (Smurfs) - Static
Great notes. I just have one singular issues: the dynamics are not aligned at all. I'd prefer it to be better everywhere, but I refuse to accept a sheet with something like m44-45, which just looks sloppy. Fix this and you're golden

Dangerous Dinner - Latios (accepted)
You bet I'm checking this one. Discussed briefly over discord. m9-12 was adjusted, with the main line being moved up an octave and octave harmonies being added where they were playable. accepted

K.K. Gumbo - Gav
Piggybacking on what lat said, I agree and would also recommend not beaming over rests. Going bass clef might solve your beaming woes, however. Up to you on this one I guess.

Submission Center / Re: Food/Cooking Update
« on: February 18, 2020, 04:45:25 PM »
- I agree, but that's how most sources have it... Alternatively, you could use the full name, Dimensional Dream.
- m55 has A#s in the LH, so I think it would be warranted here. Up to you though.
Missed this somehow.
I don't see any reason to add courtesy accidentals to the other staff when it doesn't have any.

Submission Center / Re: Food/Cooking Update
« on: February 17, 2020, 04:28:14 AM »
I have accepted Latios' Gourmet Race

Forum Games / Re: Wrong Answers Only
« on: February 16, 2020, 04:43:31 PM »
Fred continued his horrible rapper impersonation, while everyone else looked on in horror.

Submission Center / Re: Food/Cooking Update
« on: February 13, 2020, 04:32:25 AM »
- The "Dim.Dream" part of the title shouldn't have a space between "Dim." and "Dream".
- m55 RH: Courtesy natural for the An perhaps?
- m60-61: Ending numbers are a bit too close to the notes for my liking.
- m66: mf is touching barline.
- Make sure you specify that you want the LH 8vb to end after m97.
- https
- Developer should be "ZUN Soft", along with publisher Amusement Makers (this applies to all the PC-98 Touhou games btw).
That is a horrible use of title punctuation.
I don't see how a courtesy accidental would be of any use in m55 ......
Everything else was fixed.

Submission Center / Re: Food/Cooking Update
« on: February 13, 2020, 04:18:37 AM »
Godot ~ The Dark Fragrance of Coffee - MSF
I'm not picking on your sheets, you just arranged songs I know well.

I can see why you left out some of the 2nd layer notes for payability in  parts, but I think adding them on the last meat of m17 would enhance it. Unless, of course, the tone you're going for is never playing more than the the one note per measure.

I am physically unable to find any other issues. Good job.

Submission Center / Re: Food/Cooking Update
« on: February 13, 2020, 03:37:02 AM »
Egg Engines - MSF
Big fan of this arrangement, but I have a few issues that mostly stem from spacing. m16 has the 16th note getting nearly the same space as the surrounding 8th notes, which isn't great. I see that you did it to preserve the hypermeter, but it still rubs me the wrong way. Keep it if you like. The other issue is one that I'm a bit more adamant about. The system of m25 is just a mess. The notes need room to breathe and sticking to the hypermeter won't let that happen. Pulling the 4th measure down to the next system is one option that works reasonably well. The other option is to pull down m16 and respace the  measures from there, so you end up with 4 systems on page 2. Up to you whatever you choose, but I don't think that leaving that system alone is a good idea.

Submission Center / Re: Food/Cooking Update
« on: February 13, 2020, 03:16:59 AM »
Radiak488417 - PMD - Apple Woods has been accepted

Forum Games / Re: Wrong Answers Only
« on: February 11, 2020, 05:35:35 PM »
little johnny's eyes start migrating in various directions, but only muscleman has the slightest bit of concern for his health

Submission Center / Re: Food/Cooking Update
« on: February 04, 2020, 06:31:38 AM »
My spare time just took a tactical nuke to the face, but I managed to fix up Strawberry Crisis!!. It's in the dropbox folder.

Submission Center / Re: Food/Cooking Update
« on: January 27, 2020, 06:35:23 AM »
I will, time permitting, be revising the following sheets for the update:

Bravely Default - Serpent Devouring the Horizon
Touhou 3: Phantasmagoria of Dim. Dream - Strawberry Crisis!!
Umineko When They Cry - Fishy Aroma

m2 LH the last quarter restrikes (2 8ths instead of a quarter)
in m10 is as follows:

In fact, recheck your entire bassline. It doesn't repeat endlessly.
Some other examples in brief - the last beat of m22 is different.
m23 is very divvere
m24 - the half note isn't held.
m24 has no sharps.

While it's up to you, you could make a bassline that's 10x more interesting to play and hear by incorporating some of the drum rhythms, but that part is up to you.

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