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Submissions / Re: [MUL] Night in the Woods - "Rainy Day (Two Pianos)" by BrainyLucario & PKBT
« on: February 19, 2019, 03:53:12 AM »
For measures 9 and similar, you need to split up the dotted quarter note in the left hand to a quarter tied to an eighth in order to show beat 3. Also avoid using dotted half rests in measures; use a quarter + half rest instead.
The top voice in m. 65 through end is flipped upwards unnecessarily for the most part.
You can also improve the writing in the parts where you have two layers - right now there's a bunch of overlap and stems facing the wrong way.
There are also some other things you may want to reconsider, like the really long pedal line - you can replace that with a simple "con pedale"/"senza pedale" when needed.
A few parts look like they can be better optimized for two people as well - for example in m. 65 and similar the second layer can be moved to the other piano and Piano 1 could play both the current voices with one hand.
Hopefully this gives you enough to think about/work on for now before we come and check notes.
The top voice in m. 65 through end is flipped upwards unnecessarily for the most part.
You can also improve the writing in the parts where you have two layers - right now there's a bunch of overlap and stems facing the wrong way.
There are also some other things you may want to reconsider, like the really long pedal line - you can replace that with a simple "con pedale"/"senza pedale" when needed.
A few parts look like they can be better optimized for two people as well - for example in m. 65 and similar the second layer can be moved to the other piano and Piano 1 could play both the current voices with one hand.
Hopefully this gives you enough to think about/work on for now before we come and check notes.
